If Only I Had...Chapter 15

[yukinonamida]

Title: If Only I Had...(Chapter 15/20)
Author: Yuki
Pairing: RyoShige
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Romance, Supernatural, Angst
Warnings: Violence/Abuse in chapters 1-6
Summary: Losing a loved one is one of the most difficult things to live with and we always wish for a way to bring that person back. However, there are some times when that person is

Comments

[desirer91]

When I read chapters like these I never know what is best: to cry for the sadness they bring or to be overwhelmed by thier beauty.
It really was on of THE chapters...it had all the povs and it included the end of a life and the beginning of another.
It was great reading about Jiro's trust in Shige...it really was.
It was a well-balanced chapter: sadness from Asami's death and Ryo/Jiro's feelings and happiness from Jun/Miya's wedding and Shige's feelings for Remi.
I've really fallen in love with this fic and its characters (all of them now that Ara's gone)...it's gonna be sad for me to see it reach its end.
Just for more chapters...that's sad!
I really love the way you write, and I think you've improved a lot since your past works.
Already waiting for your next chapter,
-de-

[yukinonamida]

There was a lot of sadness but also happiness, so I think there isn't a specific way to feel after reading. :o I sure felt a ton of different things writing it as well.

I'm glad you have fallen in love with the story~ ^^ I too will be sad when it is over, but there are still five more chapters :)

I always love to hear that I have improved because I really have worked hard on this story and I'm actually beginning to feel proud of it :) So thank you~ <3

[waffi]

*reaches for a tissue*
...I'm so sad~ and I'm overwhelmed...I mean...this feeling to know that someone died and to be sad but at the same time you try to feel happy for the person because you know he/she is happy now and smiling down from heaven...this feeling is so heartbreaking and the last sentence of the chapter...it makes me even more sad and it makes me feel so sorry for Jiro who really really loved Asami so much and... I don't know...what will happen next? I mean...it can't continue like this...
And I really love Shige here...he's really thoughtful and he's....kinda gentle...I like it :) and although the chapter is so very sad...uhm...it has a gentle feeling and it feels somehow beautiful like when you think about Asami as an angel and the feelings they have for Asami are really beautiful...I really really like this too :D
Your stories always have such a deep feeling~ <3
When I'm thinking about it...only 5 chapters left...I'm becoming giddy XD

[yukinonamida]

I know what you mean. You might miss them but they are happy. It really is affecting Jiro badly, I mean he was really into her.

Yeah, it is sad of course because of her death but she passed away peacefully and she is happy now. They just have to believe that.

Thanks~ <3 I'm getting excited too reading all of these nice comments ^^

[noveshia]

T.T
All so sad! Jiro should be glad he isn't facing this alone. First Ara, now Asami.
At least, he gave Asami a taste of the first kiss.

I could feel a lot of different emotions here in this chap. Between Ryo and Shige, Jiro and Asami...They pulled on the many strings in my heart. This chapter is the BEST so far!
Keep it up! It was B-U-tiful! XD
Thanks for the usual!

[yukinonamida]

Even though he has Shige and Ryo in a way, he still doesn't have anyone who loves him or whom he loves.

Thank you ^_^

[angelmena]

so sad TT__TT

I start reading after my friend told me about it
and i cried from the begining T_T
I cant wait to read the next chapter but at the same time i dont want it to end ><

you are a really good writer (:

umm I hope I didn't bother you by adding you
before comment

[yukinonamida]

I'm glad you started to read it ^^ It will be sad when it ends but it isn't over yet! :)

Thank you ^^ And it doesn't bother me at all :D

Thanks for leaving a comment~ <3

[jockyasian2]

oh my gosh!
tears are streaming away! *sniffle sniffle*
i think this is a really really good chapter.
heart breaking though
love it =]

[yukinonamida]

Aww! *hands you a tissue* I'm glad you liked it even though it made you cry~