Title: If Only I Had...(Chapter 17/20)
Author: Yuki
Pairing: RyoShige
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Romance, Supernatural, Angst
Warnings: Violence/Abuse in chapters 1-6
Summary: Losing a loved one is one of the most difficult things to live with and we always wish for a way to bring that person back. However, there are some times when that person is
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No more death, I promise :P
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Actually, the main reason my last review was rushed was because I had the new pc and I had to set it up!
Anyway...how could anyone sane not have loved this chapter?
I was really scared Ryo might not be coming back (even if somehow I knew he was...I don't know...I just felt it was happening...)!
Reading Shige's feelings was really heartbreaking!
I've got a suggestion...why not write a beautiful epilogue with Ara...? (Joking! But my DoS spirit is really seeing her feeling bad because everyone else is actually happy...)
Now I'm wondering what0s gonna happen next...are e going to see Ryo's rehabilitation or are we going to jump right into the future?
Waiting for your next update,
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P.S.
I was really glad that you updated this soon!!
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Truthfully, at first I did plan on having the story end with Ryo's second death. Then I could talk about this whole story being a second chance to erase all of the "If Only I Had...s" and then Shige could move on with no regrets and although he misses Ryo, he'd have a part of Ryo in Remi. But I couldn't do it X_X so I changed it to this.
Poor Ara xD I don't think I'm going to include what is happening in the sky anymore, it seems like that is an open yet satisfying ending for Asami, Jiro and Ara. I have to work on fixing Ryo and Shige now :o It won't jump right into the future, but I will be doing some time jumps throughout the last chapters.
I wrote this in one shot last night at 4AM. xD It wasn't the best, but oh well. :o
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because I just read the chapter before this one and suddenly there was the next...so fast! XDDD
this time...no long comment!
I'm really happy for them~ ahh so happy~ and the Jiro-Asami part was so cute~ I'm so happy for them!...Ah you could say that I'm just happy XD...from sadness to happiness in one hour XD
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Happiness is good ^^
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