If Only I Had...Chapter 20

May 31, 2009 17:34


Title: If Only I Had...(Chapter 20/20)
Author: Yuki
Pairing: RyoShige
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Romance, Supernatural, Angst
Warnings: Violence/Abuse in chapters 1-6
Summary: Losing a loved one is one of the most difficult things to live with and we always wish for a way to bring that person back. However, there are some times when that person is ( Read more... )

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arisa_draconis May 31 2009, 23:04:24 UTC
WONDERFUL! WONDERFUL! AND WONDERFUL!

Really... I have no comment on this last chapter of this series. I still remember me going to give up on the story when I couldn't take any more of Shige's sadness... and I;m really glad that I didn't give up.

I love this story so much~ I hope you've got something under your sleeves after this~

ILU Yuki :D

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yukinonamida June 1 2009, 00:13:57 UTC
Thanks ^_^

I totally understand that, the sadness was overwhelming at times. x_x I too am glad that you didn't give up! ;D

I do, and it will be loads less angsty than this one. It's still in the works ;x



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sanshinyia May 31 2009, 23:13:18 UTC
The ending has arrived. I love it.&hearts The ending I mean, not the fact it ends.>_>

I skipped commenting on the 19th so this will have to do.:P Through out the whole story there has been a melancholy touch. Like these two chapters, even though they were happy and fluffy and angst was nowhere to be seen, still there was something~ Especially in Shige's parts somehow. This is probably the 10th time I'm retyping this because I don't quite know what I'm trying to say, but to put it simply I like it, it makes the story beautiful.

The part of Miya and Jun's wedding was shorter than I expected it to be, but it was very good that way. What else can I say... Well the speeches Haru and Shige gave made me sniff.:p

I don't know what I'm forgetting to say again, but all in all this was something unique. There really aren't many stories like this.^^' I'll be waiting for your future writings!

Btw, have the prom dances we once discussed about been already? I've just been wondering~

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yukinonamida June 1 2009, 00:20:32 UTC
I think it's because things aren't "perfect" and the past still affects them. So even though they are happy in the present, there are still some things (like Asami and the fact that things are always changing) that make them stop and think. It's that kind of bittersweet thing.

I wanted to make it longer but it felt like there wasn't that much else to say about it. The writer's block probably contributed to that xD

I've been working on the next one but there are still major issues with it that I need to work out.

My prom is on June 25th, but I got my dress. It's like an...olive green (I Think). I'll be posting pics when that day comes ^^

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sanshinyia June 1 2009, 10:05:03 UTC
Writer's blocks suck.>_>

Well, don't take stress of that.^^' Just work on it as you feel like.

So there's still a lot of time before it then. I couldn't remember the date at all~ :p I really want to see those pics once it's the time! ^^

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fairy_illusions May 31 2009, 23:13:42 UTC
Remi sounds so adorable!!!!

Papa and Daddy omg that is too adorable. I could squish Ryo and Shige right now. And awww Miya and Jun have a little boy xD RyoShige and MiyaJun can totally set them up for playdates :D

I like the ending :] It's a happy ending after all the torture and pain. I wonder if Asami and Jiro are in the sky smiling down at little Remi growing up to be a cute little girl with glasses like her Papa's? :D

I really liked it Yuki~ &hearts

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yukinonamida June 1 2009, 00:24:50 UTC
She is so cute ♥

I think those names suit them ^^ lol. Oh totally, they will go on playdates. ^_^

I wanted to do a happy ending that wasn't instantly happy but instead worked towards it. There was so much pain in this fic x_X I feel like a part of my heart is now long gone xD I'm sure they are~ :)

I'm glad you liked it ^_^ ♥

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swang11 May 31 2009, 23:25:15 UTC
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!
I didn't comment on 19 cause it linked to this one so...

I love how this story was from beginning to end. There was so much going on from death to abuse to pure happiness and I'm so happy that I was able to finish this. Once again..LOVE LOVE.

Thanks for writing this :)

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yukinonamida June 1 2009, 00:25:55 UTC
^_^ That's always nice to hear. It was truly a roller coaster ride and I'm glad you stuck with it!

Thank you for reading ♥

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jockyasian2 June 1 2009, 00:07:03 UTC
it's flipping awesome!!
WONDERFUL 12154541245 out of 10
cute ending
i loved it
~rin =]

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yukinonamida June 1 2009, 00:26:34 UTC
Thanks for reading ♥ I'm glad you liked it ;D

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