Hard Hand to Hold - Ten

Jul 10, 2009 10:06

Chapter Ten:

“Where you gonna spend the night?  There’s no other place to be than by my side”

Shige:

The room is dimly lit, royal blue curtains pulled over the only window.  The comforter is soft under me and Koji is warm lying on top of me, kissing me slowly.  We had been talking for a while on his bed, while I glanced around at the sports ( Read more... )

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2morrow_is_now July 10 2009, 14:38:04 UTC
they met in a staircase?
and i had to think for a while that 'kei-san' is actually kei-chan. so used to it being koyama or kei-chan xD

it's still so sad even if things seem to be just fine.

&hearts

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2morrow_is_now July 10 2009, 14:38:21 UTC
oooh, first.
xP

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yukinonamida July 10 2009, 14:55:38 UTC
Yeah, the idea popped out of nowhere. xP I needed somewhere for them to be alone and his apartment was out since Noe was there.

Even if everything seems to be okay, it's still sad because they're not together nor are they fully happy =o

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badbatazz July 10 2009, 15:48:03 UTC
at least they still have each other to go too. but i wish that they just dump everyone else and run away together.

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yukinonamida July 10 2009, 15:53:20 UTC
It shows that their relationship got to that level once again~ :) And that would be nice, but way too easy :P

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noveshia July 10 2009, 16:02:07 UTC
Nice setting.. Seems very realistic.
I somehow liked the connection and communication they have even though they're not really together. Its really meaningful.

** Its been a while, but, I've been thinking... and this format really reminds me of the book "The Time Traveler's Wife".
I'm getting used to this! XD
As usual... thank you for your hard work! ^^

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yukinonamida July 10 2009, 16:33:54 UTC
Thanks♥ There's such a difference between what he has with Koji and what he has with Ryo.

Hmm, I've never read it. Is it good? :o

Thank you for reading :)

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noveshia July 11 2009, 13:25:28 UTC
o.o
About the book...
Yeah! In fact, I feel like recommending it to you! XDD
Its about a guy who can time travel and he sometimes travels to the past and future without really intending to. He meets with his future-to-be wife, who is rather too young to know or understand anything, at times... It was written in exactly this format!
Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the next update! ^^

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yukinonamida July 11 2009, 14:04:41 UTC
Ooh..sounds really good. I'll have to get it next time I'm near a bookstore :) Thanks ;D

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snake68 July 10 2009, 16:40:09 UTC
I really like this Shige. Maybe its how he denies the fact that he still has feelings for Ryo or that he is too good for him I don't know. But it feels like they are very human-like and thats why I really feel that, through the maturaty and human interactions, I can understand the story and understand the characters. Both of them are very complex and to some extent, humans are complex beings. They harvest more then just sad and happy emotions. And through your writing it feels as if I can connect to them <3

Can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the good work. I'm sure many people will be waiting <3

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yukinonamida July 10 2009, 16:52:24 UTC
It makes me really happy to hear that you can connect to the feelings and emotions~ ♥ It's not always black and white.

Thanks so much :)

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jtriskell July 10 2009, 18:42:13 UTC
yukinonamida July 10 2009, 19:33:12 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you~

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