Snow and Ash - Two

Aug 03, 2009 11:24

I run my hand over Ryo’s back in an attempt to calm him down. We’re back home now, sitting by the coffee table and everyone is here, waiting for an explanation of what is going on. I don’t know either - Ryo hasn’t said a word since and it’s as if he’s frozen with fear.

I told them as much as I knew - I felt anxious, we went for a walk and it was ( Read more... )

-snow and ash

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sheichan18 August 3 2009, 15:35:34 UTC
first?!! mwahahaha! victory! lol

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sheichan18 August 3 2009, 15:45:02 UTC
nice snow and ash.. that explains the title! hihihi.,., so happy, can't wait for more progress in the story! wee~

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yukinonamida August 3 2009, 15:50:17 UTC
yup, that's why I named the story that :) Thanks for reading~

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sheichan18 August 3 2009, 15:53:47 UTC
see how excited i was?! read it before anyone else could.. i like the use of the names of the twins too.. and the explanation of the black eyes,.. ^^

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yukinonamida August 3 2009, 15:58:26 UTC
Lol yeah :) Thanks ^^ Everything has a reason behind it~

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chika1611 August 3 2009, 16:20:38 UTC
Whew, Shiori and Kumiko combined as Shiku.

This chapter is cool. I'm expecting the next chapter even more now. XDDD

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yukinonamida August 3 2009, 16:22:19 UTC
Yupyup :)

It was quite a fun one to write :D I'm glad you liked it ^^

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desirer91 August 3 2009, 16:27:51 UTC
I love having the chance of coming back into the world of 7Pog, I think I won't stop repeating that, ever (or at least until this story's end).
I like how this story's developing, with the whole "Snow and Ash" meaning...and I do agree with you when you say that jealousy and greed have their hands entwined together.
Like 7PoG angst is always there...I loved reading about Shige's feelings for Ryo and his will to comfort him, you really showed how much they care for each other.
And how not to sympathize with Shige's desire to wake up like nothing had happened?
Btw, thanks for having thought of me when writing "mistery loves company",
-de-
PS
Reading this story made me so nostalgic that I decided to read 7PoG all over again^^

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yukinonamida August 3 2009, 16:37:41 UTC
And I'll keep repeating "me too" because I am having a blast

I try to capture their relationship from 7PoG even though it's been a while, but they really do care <3

;D

It really does make it easier to follow this one I think because I do make references back to it once in a while

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mikiyu_chan August 3 2009, 18:56:42 UTC
oh my... i must say i am starting to regret what i have commented earlier about the girl... she is starting scare me already. XD haha.

but i still didn't understand something... the curse began with them or was it with that greedy man mentioned on 7pog? bit confusing... but... well... i think it will make sense after come chapters...

oh yeah, please. i would love to see more koyapi love or read a chapter in their povs. <3 it would be a gift to me! haha.

hope next chapter won't take long. i am already anxious...

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yukinonamida August 3 2009, 19:15:15 UTC
Lol I told you :P

Ah, sorry for confusing you. The man from 7PoG originated the curse and Shiku's more involved with the dreams and she also is in charge of something else that will be revealed later on.

Koyapi will begin next chapter ^^

It shouldn't take too long ^^

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