Snow and Ash - Three

Aug 05, 2009 15:38

Ryo:

Telling the others about Shiku went just as I thought it would.  They didn’t say much; there wasn’t much to say.  We still don’t know what she wants, after all.

Even if you have a problem, time does not stop for it. You still have to eat, sleep, work, and act as if nothing is wrong while silently trying to deal with it.  All you can do is ( Read more... )

-snow and ash

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chika1611 August 5 2009, 23:33:03 UTC
Hoo... Koyama and Yamapi argued... it's very unusually 'coz I always seen them being lovey-dovey.

So... Ryo Shige met Shiku finally? And she took Shige's curse from him? I don't know should I be happy with this fact or not, but maybe I shouldn't 'coz without the curse Shige couldn't be with Ryo. *pouts*

I like this chapter, really. Ummm... but I think you're wrong at the end of the chapter. It should be 'end of chapter three', not 'end of chapter four'. Sorry if I quite offended you. *bows*

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yukinonamida August 6 2009, 00:37:35 UTC
Yes, it definitely is different for the two. But no couple can be lovey-dovey all the time.

She's in the process of taking it away from him. (That's why his power has been off) He'll lose it fully the next night at midnight. It's a bittersweet situation.

Oh, thank you! I didn't catch that. What happened was, when I wrote this I had it planned to be number four but changed it. I forgot to change the end, but I fixed it now.~

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chika1611 August 7 2009, 02:10:11 UTC
You're welcome. And I'm waiting for the next update. *grins*

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swang11 August 6 2009, 02:34:07 UTC
aaaaahhh!! i love how you can just make a whole fic on how shige gets the curse and his power to creating another one with him not having it anymore. this is amazing. :)

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yukinonamida August 6 2009, 02:47:22 UTC
I was worried that people might not like it but I'm glad it is going over pretty well ^^ Thanks for reading~

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fairy_illusions August 6 2009, 05:42:51 UTC
lol I love how at this point, we (the readers) are all like SHIGE IS SUPPOSE TO BE CURSED!!! *flails*

My question is, what will happen to dear Ryo-chan now since they're going to be "fixing" the rules he broke...

Somehow any scary movie or story has an element of long haired little girls xD I just realized this lol I wonder if it's because cute, "innocent" little girls with big eyes can totally stare someone down...XD

Next chapter soon, hopefully? :D

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yukinonamida August 6 2009, 14:24:10 UTC
It sounds strange if you think about it to be upset over someone losing a curse xD

I was actually inspired by Orphan xD Little kids are creepy in scary movies

Hopefully I'll be able to write it quickly, but a lot will happen next chapter

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sheichan18 August 6 2009, 14:20:07 UTC
woah! don't tell me,,, they won't be able to touch each other again?!! gaa~ noooooooooooooooooooo~ , and love koyapi here, stop hurting koyamama! i hate having him like that.. T_T, nice chap! affected me very much!

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yukinonamida August 6 2009, 14:25:45 UTC
Ryo will still have half of the curse so the "10 second rule" will still be in effect...so they can touch, just not for very long at a time

Koyapi's relationship needed to be shaken up a bit, they needed more attention ^^ I'm glad you liked it~

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sheichan18 August 6 2009, 14:34:01 UTC
but isn't 10 sec too short for them? hahaha.. i wish they could just both do away w/ the curse or have it together, i dunno i'm being incoherent here all of a sudden, i'm weird and selfish like that., aww~ i just hope koyapi survives this rocky situation too! XDD, BTW, favor?? (puppy eyes) pls don't make me cry much in the next chaps.. lol

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yukinonamida August 6 2009, 15:02:03 UTC
It's better than nothing~ But that will be explored over the next two chapters.

Well, losing the curse that has become part of him as well as being forced to accept his old life isn't going to be easy for him so...it's probably going to be sad but maybe not tearjerking sad...I'm not sure :o I haven't written it yet

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snow_meow August 6 2009, 16:27:21 UTC
What the hell!!
Why is she taking away the curse? Does this mean it's time for Shige to die?

I feel so sad for KoyaPi. Both of them are hurting so much.

I wonder what can they do to destroy the origin of the curse.

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yukinonamida August 6 2009, 16:33:34 UTC
She has her reasons behind it. Nah, he'll just go back to being a human without the curse.

Yeah, but I can't totally blame P

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