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HP // Untitled // SiriusxRemus // Dec 2004

Dec 31, 2004 11:13

If you asked anyone, anyone who knew, mind you, they would tell you that Sirius Black and Remus Lupin were so in love and had the perfect relationship ( Read more... )

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tehsweetness January 31 2005, 07:36:10 UTC

ah gods. you stabbed me. it was gut wrenching. i loved it :D

yukixue January 31 2005, 08:22:15 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! ^_^

prongsy January 31 2005, 08:12:51 UTC

Sad!!! *cries* Especially where it ended! I'd hoped for... for something that proved Remus's fears wrong... :*-(

yukixue January 31 2005, 08:24:07 UTC

Ahh well beautifulmess21 asked for angst. =P Thanks for reading!

sweety167 January 31 2005, 08:29:29 UTC

Oh. That was...beautiful, and painful.
I love the style of it too.

I do think you broke my heart with that one. Wonderful job really.

yukixue January 31 2005, 08:47:31 UTC

Thank you! <3

minnow_53 January 31 2005, 09:59:49 UTC

I wish I hadn't switched on the computer this morning, because I have tons to do and keep being assailed by wonderful fics that I simply have to comment on.

This is an original and very authentic (IMO) viewpoint, with so many subtleties and subtexts yet it's all upfront, clear and simple. Wow. That takes some doing. You have managed to cram (sorry, wrong word but you know what I mean) a world of experience into a distilled few moments of reflection. I love Remus's direct yet indirect voice in this.

Anyway, it's lovely. Thank you.^_^

yukixue January 31 2005, 16:35:48 UTC

Thank you so much! It's such a huge compliment coming from someone as talented as yourself! ^___^

minnow_53 January 31 2005, 16:53:23 UTC

Oh, gosh, you've made me go red! That lovely compliment applies to you as well, you know.
^_^

_xanthia January 31 2005, 10:18:20 UTC

Wow... That was beautiful even if it's rather sad. Feel so bad for Remus. I like the style it was delivered in. I can imagine the one telling us this story, the 'you' is Lily. But maybe that's just me.

yukixue January 31 2005, 16:43:36 UTC

=) I didn't think of a person for the 'you', when I wrote it, actually. I was just looking for an alternate viewpoint. BUUUT my beta told me "OMG LILY" as well, so. Yes. ^__^ Thanks for reading!