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[yuko_sworro]

Okay, so you guys are probably all tired of this by now, but to anyone who cares to look once more, I have reworked my epic poem once more and I believe I have come to a settling point. At least good enough to turn in for my class. So look if you like, or don't. It's really your call. But thanks to all whos suggestions helped me make the proper

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[lovethybeech]

I really love it, Grace

huzzah!

[grandada]

wonderful. i don't really know what to say, you're right in calling it "epic" that just what it is. Beowulf better watch out...

[eugoogoly]

Beautiful! I guess all your hard work payed off. I still probably couldn't write something so wonderful poetically even if I did work on it my entire life time. You know you're gonna read this is class, right?

Well, off to finish you Problem/Solution, eh?

[masashake]

this is incredible. this truely displays your solidness as a writer i think. this reminds me, as things often fall back with me to an anime series, of the show berserk. this is a most amazing series that i sugest you rent from block buster one day. i loved your poem. strideful and true.

keep on keepin on.

[huckleberrybee]

Splendid, Grace. Splendid.

Only adding to your awesomeness, previously noted.

P.S. An apostrophe is missing from "snake's bite" at the beginning.