Fanfic: Lost Heart

Jun 02, 2012 22:15


Title: Lost Heart *Chapter 1*
Author: yume16
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ryo, yamapi, nc-17, ryopi, fic: lost heart, multichapter, fanfic

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juddyjudd June 2 2012, 20:55:39 UTC
my, my... your left it in a place... now I really want the following chapter!!! OMG!!!
poor ryo, though... yamapi is being mean to him

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yume16 June 4 2012, 15:38:22 UTC
Hehehe, sorry about that. I try to not take too long :)
true...Pi is really being mean to him...

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yamapi_luver4 June 2 2012, 21:36:27 UTC
hahahahaha i wanna stick my hand in the pocket of pis tight pants~ lucky ryo...

this was just awesome. i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!! ahhhh!!!!

they make me laugh so much XD

koyashige! yay! lol

poor pi getting pulled around all the time, and not just by ryo!

i cant wait to see how this turns out! :D

oh yeah, and i love the banner! it fits so perfectly too <3

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yume16 June 4 2012, 15:41:01 UTC
LOL, that's true. I wouldn't mind doing that either XD

Thank you! I try not to make you wait for too long.

Yay, I am happy you laughed :3

I couldn't help, but add them...

Yeah, Koyama picked up Ryo's habit XD

Thank you. It was quite hard to get Pi in the place he is now...somehow he always got cut off...

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yamapi_luver4 June 5 2012, 03:15:29 UTC
i dont mind you adding them!!! hehehe

well im glad it ended up working out :D

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sodigirl1980 June 2 2012, 22:07:41 UTC
I sooooo wish I had a sick Tomo to take care of!!!!
This new fic is great ! I can't wait to read the newt chapters!!

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yume16 June 4 2012, 15:41:41 UTC
Not only you! >< I would love to take care of him.

Thank you. I'll try to write it soon.

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sweetspicyhot June 5 2012, 05:17:35 UTC
Hello! Thanks for thinking of me on my birthday.:D So much to love with this chapter. Ryo taking care of Pi of course tops the list of awesome things. i especially love the way Ryo teases him about seeing everything. And also how he asks about the cans and bottles.

Poor Pi cannot catch a break---ah he is so lonely right now--he is not really thinking properly--really Ryo has every advantage here--except for Pi's goodwill (but that will come later ne). I do believe that Pi would have thought of clothes if his heart wouldn't have been broken. But if Pi had gone shopping alone there wouldn't be the delicious Koyashige scene. I so want to know what Koyama knows about Ryo.

And then Shige brings up Akito--and I blurted out "Shige don't do that" like I was with them in the store. LOL

this was lovely and awesome and I can't wait for more!

Hugs and hearts :D:D:D<3<3<3

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yume16 June 6 2012, 14:34:45 UTC
You are such a faithful reader...how couldn't I? <3
Thank you so much...he was kind of forced into the situation, but I am sure he had his fun, especially with all the teasing he did. There is nothing he misses ;)

Yeah, he really is a mess at the moment...and his heart will need to heal. Hehehe, Ryo really does ;)I thihnk you are right. He certainly wouldn't have forgotten about it and I couldn't help myself. I really started to like Koyashige. There is really nothing you do not notice...Koyama knows something about Ryo indeed.

Aww, that's really cute *hugs*, but Shige really should have shut up...poor Pi

Thank you very much and since I am free the next few days I hope to get some of the next chapter written :3

<3

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bluelillie June 5 2012, 11:49:16 UTC
Yaaay! Another chapter!

I saw this last night, but was too sleepy to concentrate and thought it would be unfair to read it, so I just finished reading it now and its very interesting.

I can't wait to read what would happened between Ryo and Tomo!

Please update soon! ^^

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yume16 June 6 2012, 14:36:29 UTC
Yupp, the next one ^^

Aww, that is so nice of you. Thank you very much. *hugs*

I'll try to make it interesting ;)

Hahaha, I'll try. There are good chances that it won't take me too long since I have some free time at the moment.

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