Fanfic: A Step back

[yume16]

Title: A step back
Author: yume16
Disclaimer: The plot is mine...but not the boys *sob*
Beta: blursakana
Pairing(s): Ryopi
Rating: PG-13
Genre: A little angst
Warnings: none
Summary: Sometimes you have to take a step back to see things clearer
Author Notes: I am not sure about this one-shot at all, but my beta said it was okay. So I hope you enjoy this...

Comments

[ryo_pyon]

This was amazing! I loved it. I loved the reference to pointillism and how it gave Ryo a better perspective. I'm glad that Pi was able to reciprocate Ryo's feelings and that they are together in the end. Ryo was so cute when he confessed.

Thanks so much for sharing. <3

[yume16]

Thank you very much! I once saw the orginal of the picutre I posted above and found it a few days ago on the Internet...I couldn't help but add it. Yeah, they are together now...they need each other :)
He really was, well I wanted him to be cute^^

<3

[effi_g]

wow!! this is absolutely gorgeous!!
So nice, so real. It really refreshing to have a confession fic with so many emotions and uncertainty, a reaction that is feasible. A Pi that made a realisation that he can't live without ryo just like ryo can't live without him, but he didn't just leap straight into it like they seem to do in most fics. it's lovely.
I loved the baru reference btw, Just made ryo seem all the more helpless in his situation, the way he talked to baru.

The painting reference is great, and I love how pi thought of pixels as well as the painting, i guess it kind of works in a similar manner ne?

Sorry, i'm like Pi, not very good with my words haha but I love this story, thank you very much for writing it and sharing it ^^

[yume16]

Aww, thank you very much. I am so happy ou think so.
Yeah, I think there is a lot to confessions and I wanted to add a lot of feelings...even though I wrote it in Pi's perspective and not Ryo's.
Thank you. I wanted them to be careful since they share such a long friendship I can imagine it is a big step...and a scary one.
I think friends are very important in such a situation :)

That makes me really happy (as someone who does a lot of art) Yeah, it is really similar!

Oh don't worry. This is a lovely comment and I understood easily what you wanted to tell me <3

[sodigirl1980]

I loved it !
It was a very beautiful story where you can feel all the feelings they have towards each other.
Ryo seems to be desperatly in love and Pi... scared but I don't know if that's what you wanted us to realize or think but I have the feeling that the thing Pi is scared of is not really to lose Ryo-chan but to love him.
Well anyway that was great as usual!!
I'm still translating my fic from french to english but I really don't know if I should post it as I don't have the feeling there are many people reading it! What do you think? Yeah I know, I talk to you aas you're my advisor!!!

[yume16]

Thank you

[sodigirl1980]

Yhank you so much for your answer!
You're right! As I really love translating this fic I decided to keep doing it!
That's why I posted the new chapter, the following is ready and I am curently working on the next one!
I just really want the english to be good as it not my native language also! It is so much easier in french!!!
So... yeah! I'm enjoying myself!!!
Thank you for your supprt!!!
*hugs*

[bluelillie]

Very CUTE!!!

I really like your Ryo in this one-shot! He is very forward ^///^

The way he came to confess to Tomo is very incredible! Giving him a gift hahaha!! So funny!

I enjoyed reading this so much!

The new ERO PV is very inspiring ne~!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter of your multi-chapter-ed fic! ^^

[yume16]

Thank you <3

Hahaha yeah, he really tells Pi how he feels about him.
I am happy you laughed and well, the gift was quite unusual, ne ;)
Thank you *hugs*
It really is! I wrote this thanks to you ;)

hehehe yupp, I am writing on it :3

[yamasho]

that was good
that was really deep meaning what ryo said
and pi just open your heart to ryo

[yume16]

Thank you
and I am glad you think so.
It will be tough for Ryo otherwise, ne...