Fanfic: Broken

Sep 07, 2012 21:59



Title: Broken
Author: yume16
Disclaimer: The plot is mine...but not the boys *sob*
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ryo, yamapi, ryopi, pg, drabble, fanfic

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sweetspicyhot September 7 2012, 20:29:27 UTC
i am sorry that you still have the cold ( ... )

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yume16 September 9 2012, 16:56:17 UTC
Well, I am finally getting better :)

You are right XD at first I was really surprised why you were happy till I read on.
You know? I am blaming you for this. I so am.
You really got my imagination rolling with this. A few of your ideas are really appealing and the story already went crazy in my head. *sighs* What are you doing to me?

Hm, I am not sure how to do this at the moment. Especially, since I have a multichapter waiting to be written. I really want to write this now...I will have to think about it though. Maybe I should make a drabble-series out fo this? But then again, I know myself better. The chapters will get longer and longer...

You are a liar? Na, it's okay^^ I don't mind requests.

Thank you very much...I thought it was important to see both of their thoughts and feelings. He desperately doesn't want to loose him...

I put it on my to-do-list^^ I can't say when I will start, but the ideas are there (plenty of them)

<3

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juddyjudd September 7 2012, 20:36:20 UTC
OH GOD! I feel like I want to cry... I feel sooo bad for both of them... and the cute girl.... god... not good...

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yume16 September 9 2012, 16:57:14 UTC
*gives reassuring hug* please don't cry.
They are really in a terrible situation...Tomo's poor baby girl, ne.

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juddyjudd September 9 2012, 17:41:06 UTC
I know... but it's so sad :(

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bluelillie September 7 2012, 22:47:04 UTC
This is really incredible drabble!

Is is so emotional that you can feel each of Ryo's and Tomohisa's painful feelings!

Poor Tomohisa, he named his daughter Ryoko after Ryo!!!

I guess, timing wasn't on their side!

Really great story-line!

PS: Get well soon!!! *Hugs*

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yume16 September 9 2012, 16:59:17 UTC
Thank you so much.

They really don't know what to do...and feel a lot of pain.

Yeah, he did. He couldn't forget after all.

It really wasn't. They missed each other.

Thanks!

I am finally getting better *hugs back*

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sodigirl1980 September 8 2012, 00:14:08 UTC
Just beautiful...

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yume16 September 9 2012, 16:59:46 UTC
Simple words...that really make me smile
<3

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lilly0 September 8 2012, 08:28:18 UTC
I agree with sweetspicyhot: This almost cries for a sequel!
It's a wonderful drabble! The angst in it was amazing! Two people, who love each other, but timing is not on their side.

Thanks so much for sharing <3

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yume16 September 9 2012, 17:02:17 UTC
I listened to the two of you^^ I will write something for this. I am not sure when I can start though.
I am still a little scared to write angst since I am a 'fluff-person'. So I am really glad. They missed the moment to love each other...

Thank you for reading :3

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