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Fanfic: Lost Heart

Jun 15, 2013 21:33

Title: Lost Heart *Chapter 6*
Author: yume16
Beta: blursakana
Disclaimer: Only the plot is mine...
Pairing(s): Ryopi
Genre: AU (!)
Warnings: Language
Rating: -Chapter: PG
- Complete Fanfic: NC-17 (I guess)
Summary: Tomohisa is seriously not interested in love...
Author Notes: I know this took forever. I am truly sorry, but I had some troubles.

( “Are you my son’s new boyfriend?” A voice cut through the air and his head snapped up )

ryo, yamapi, nc-17, ryopi, fic: lost heart, multichapter, fanfic

Comments 11

sweetspicyhot June 15 2013, 19:35:32 UTC

Yay Spot Spot Spot Yay. I have settled on M&Ms for summer because they have a hard candy shell and won't melt.

yume16 June 15 2013, 19:50:15 UTC

You make me speechless with how fast you are. Oh, M&Ms...yummy! I would love to become your helper.

sweetspicyhot June 19 2013, 06:38:19 UTC

All I can think of when I read this is: I can't believe that Akito is there. Just when Ryo and Tomo are starting to come together.

I love how fast Tomohisa's mother comes around after meeting Ryo. And his sister is very funny. They all assume that he and Ryo are already together--well finding them so cuddly one would naturally think that.

Tomo does seem to be clinging to Ryo a bit---on the train as well. It's like his body is willing to accept what his mind cannot.

It's a bit heartbreaking to think of Tomo rationalizing Akito's behavior, and rationalizing away Ryo's gentle explanations.

I want to show you some of the footage I have of Mt. Fuji taken with the smart phone from the high speed train. This chapter made me miss Japan, but I have good memories. I never did write that travel post.lol

Thanks for this update. I can't wait to find out what happens next.:D

Hugs <3

yume16 June 22 2013, 15:33:50 UTC

Life is cruel...or well, since I am the author I guess I am cruel? I can't tell you whether he will be there or not, but you are right, Tomo and Ryo are finally getting a little closer.

He has a nice family. They are just worried about him. I have been dying to write Rina. They are closer than Tomo is willing to admit ;)

Tomo is very lonely and hurt and Ryo is there for him. I wonder when he will come around.

Certainly, I always feel like such a mean person when I write him like that, but I really want Tomo to be in love.

Yes please! I would love to see your pictures. I can only imagine things in my head so it would be a big help.

Thank you. Your comment is quite motivating. I will work on the next chapter soon.

<3 *hugs*

bluelillie June 15 2013, 22:22:01 UTC

Hello!!

Glad you are back! Its really sad what happened to your PC :(

I really enjoyed reading this chapter.

Can't wait to read if Akito is really there or not!

yume16 June 18 2013, 19:39:06 UTC

*hugs*

Yeah, I really missed you. I know, but I have accepted it by now. It was my own stupidity.

I am glad :)

You'll see in the next chapter. I will be faster now!

juddyjudd June 15 2013, 22:30:44 UTC

And nice again... But i really want to know the ir stories ^^

yume16 June 18 2013, 19:39:47 UTC

You will learn about them in the next chapter ;)
I'll try to upload soon.

juddyjudd June 18 2013, 20:16:26 UTC

yay!!!!!

minhha_lg91 June 18 2013, 15:42:22 UTC

Do you know how happy I am when I see your update *hug* sorry about your PC, have you tried some recover software, I have lost some files when my PC broke down before but be able to recover some

Anw, so happy with this one, hope Ryo can cure Pi's heart :D

yume16 June 18 2013, 19:41:49 UTC

It has been long, hasn't it? I am happy to talk to you, too. I tried five recovery programs, but none of them could save my fics. I don't know why either.

Haha, you will see. I won't tell you <3