Fanfic: A Birthday in a different Style

Jun 25, 2013 16:20


Title: A Birthday in a different Style
Author: yume16
Disclaimer: If the boys were mine they would be married. Obviously, they are not *duhhhhh*
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ryo, yamapi, nc-17, one-shot, ryopi, fanfic

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sweetspicyhot June 25 2013, 15:55:26 UTC
Spot-- hope you feel better.:D

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yume16 June 30 2013, 18:19:25 UTC
It's still one of the fics I had saved, but yes, I do^^

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sweetspicyhot June 30 2013, 18:40:46 UTC
Seriously hot. So hot and funny at the same time.:D You know how I love to put Pi in difficult situations myself. So I agree with the plan and the revenge that Pi needed to exact.:D

Meisa was a live wire ne. She is bold and I feel like there were several hours of off camera PWP after she took Jin home.

But you know Ryo, so awesome--i love how he stayed sober and only ate cake so that he could make sure Pi was okay. And i enjoyed all the little surprises like the cat at the end. So he had to climb in bed with Pi. Love a bit of fluff at the end.

Thanks so much for this. i don't think I managed to convey how hot this fic is. It's hard to write hot, funny, and romantic all at the same time. But you did it. :D Keep going my friend.<3

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yume16 June 30 2013, 19:01:46 UTC
Thank you. I really tried to get that mix. He is well-suited for such situations...and he is cute struggling. I think the prompt was about Pi being strapped on a toy...but I have my problems with non-con...so the revenge was absolutely necessary :)

I can't imagine her any differently. You are right with that. There was certainly a lot going on. I am really falling for the Jin/Meisa pairing...

My Ryo will probably never be heartless. He just has to care for Pi. The cat...that was my randomness kicking in. XD I sometimes wonder if I am not straying off topic with things like that, but if you like it then I am glad.

Aww, I absolutely love your comments and I know it is not easy to write them, but you don't have to worry. Your message reached me and you made me happy. Like usual :) Your comments mean a lot to me.

<3

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yamasho June 26 2013, 11:25:10 UTC
that torturing
ryo S is back

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yume16 June 30 2013, 18:20:05 UTC
It was certainly tough.
Haha, yes...though they are both S XD

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gemplee June 26 2013, 18:49:13 UTC
so cute. I am beginning to like ryopi. thank you so much for sharing your fic.

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yume16 June 30 2013, 18:20:46 UTC
Aww, thank you. They are really a loveable pairing, so I am happy to hear that :3
<3

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