fanfic: My Star

[yume16]

Title: My Star
Author: yume16
Disclaimer: If the boys were mine they would be married. Obviously, they are not *duhhhhh*
Beta: my Beta is not there at the moment
Pairing(s): KitaFuji,
Rating: PG
Genre: angst
Warnings: un-betaed, chibi!KitaFuji, angst-y angst
Summary: Two little boys meet in Kanagawa and chase their stars.
Author Notes: I think that

Comments

[sweetspicyhot]

Spot spot, it's jellybean season again. So excited to read this when I get home. :D

[yume16]

Someday, I will have to write a fic involving jellybeans. I will dedicate it to you ;)

[sweetspicyhot]

I love this. It is sweetly sad, and has just the right amount of angst. I love all the stars imagery and the way they are both alone but they have each other. I think in some ways idols, even when they are in a group are alone ne--working on different projects--all having different managers. Maybe at the end of this fic Fujigaya has temporarily given up. But there is always hope. I see the band aid falling out of the wallet in a future fic and the keychain--well there are so many possibilities. i forget where but once I heard "There are no happy endings because nothing ends." I think it was in a movie. Anyway, Thanks for writing this. I am so glad you are back my friend.<333333

I am holding you to the promise of a jellybean fic btw. Lol

[yume16]

I am glad! Yeah, I still feel like I lack the practice for angst. I have been dying to play with Taisuke's name and I was so happy when the idea came to me. Yes, they were very lonely kids. Honestly, I would never want to have such a job. I can't imagine it anything else but lonely. There are many possibilities. Let's hope they have the courage to acknowledge them and don't act like scared little boys. Oh, I love this saying. It is utterly beautiful and makes so much sense. Though, I start every day determined for it to end in a little happy ending ;) But I like that, too. It means there is always hope.
So am I. I missed you.

Hahaha, sure, just give me some time to come up with a plot XD

[racanai]

The catching stars theme is really great! And how Taisuke became Hiro's star, his sun that kept him alive is so cute and so sad! T-T
I like to believe that this has a happy ending! In a non-romantic kind, tbh. What's wrong with me? Oo The way they have acted with each other in the past leaves the possibility of both, but I quite like the idea that they know they are reaching for the top together, reaching for the stars again. ^^

[yume16]

Thank you, I am glad you liked it. Yeah, I know his sun is very important to him.
Well, in my head they will be always scared little boys that don't dare to reach out towards each other again to not get hurt. But I guess in a way you are right. They are striving together to the top and it can be some kind of happiness, too. You make me question what a happy ending is. Thank you for the thought.

[shibaru11]

this is so beautiful....and very touching piece....
and a very good ending....
thank you for writing this....

[yume16]

Oh, thank you. I am glad when it moved you and if you liked my ending even though it is not that happy.
Thank you for commenting :)

[hoangkhanh2707]

Oh my god this is so sad.. It's incredibly touching. I can totally imagine little Mitsu and Taisuke >< And in the end, Mitsu did recognize his sun, but somehow it hurtssss so much ;_____; And Taisuke can feel sth about the other, I hope they will find each other again ( ; _ ; )/~~~
Thank you for bringing me these precious feelings, you did a wonderful job! <3

[yume16]

I am glad I could convey the mood of the fic. They must have been cute, but lonely children. Yeah, he found his sun, but it is difficult to reach out again. They both remember each other. Maybe they will, maybe they won't^^ I am not that sure myself.

Thank you very much. Hearing that makes me incredibly happy <3

[chrysiida_tori]

This is so sweet and beautiful. Hiro trying to catch his star... You made my heart skip a beat! ^_^

[yume16]

Thank you! I am happy you liked it. Aww, your heart skipped a beat? Yay!