Comments | yume16: 4 fics

yume16

4 fics

Feb 18, 2015 20:52

I found a website that generates first lines for a story and it was kind of fun. The fics are short and a little nonsensical, but it relaxed me. I hope you enjoy them anyway. They are all KitaFuji (Who would have figured XD) and un-betaed, but I like how raw they are. Usually, I add and delet a lot before posting anything, but this time I forced ( Read more... )

hiro, nc-17, taisuke, pg, kitafuji, pg-13, fanfic

Comments 8

juddyjudd February 19 2015, 21:13:31 UTC

such cute fics :D I feel bad for them in the third one... but the cake... the cake was great XD

yume16 February 20 2015, 19:30:24 UTC

Thank you :) Yeah, I was a little shocked how this one turned out as well. I like cake,too. I had fun being silly XD

nicnatha February 23 2015, 15:07:25 UTC

So :D I liked them all, after all I love Mitsu and Gaya together :) The Cake was absolutely the best xD So for the wedding, I want an invitation :D

Really nice work :)

yume16 February 24 2015, 15:32:50 UTC

Aww, thank you. I am glad. Writing 'Cake' was fun :) I'll certainly join you on that wedding. It would be awesome!

Thank you for reading :3

sweetspicyhot March 6 2015, 00:13:17 UTC

I love them all!!! You always have the best plot ideas. Am I wrong to like the third one best-- the most angsty one? I want more of it. More of them all. The cake one was so sweet. Ahhh I cannot choose. It was an unfair question.<3

yume16 March 10 2015, 15:28:52 UTC

Thank you! I am not sure if I can say they are my ideas since the first line provided a lot. I wrote the third one very quickly and no, it is not wrong at all. Sometimes I like angsty stuff as well. What do you mean you want more of it? Of the drabble or in general such short fics? Just asking^^ The one with cake had to be sweet ;)
I am sorry, but I am happy you tried answering:) You are the first to do so <3

keith14 March 11 2015, 01:40:45 UTC

Hello :) Thank you so much for writing this. I think all 4 fics are good but I think my favorite is the 2nd fic whick is about the cake and pigtails hahahah Mitsu must look really cute in that pigtails hahahaha I like this fic because it's so cute hahahaha Taipi and Mitsu are so detailed on what they like during their wedding hahaha. I had so much fun in reading that story :) Hope to read more FujiKita fics from you :) Take care ^^

yume16 March 14 2015, 20:39:46 UTC

Thank you. I'm happy you liked them! The one with cake was the most fun fic I think. Yeah, they know exactly how they want their wedding to be. It would be fun like that;) I think the pigtails could be cute XD. I'm going to write them again for sure and I finally have some more time the next weeks. Thank you for reading and telling me what you think <3