Blood Stained Roses Chapter 5

[yume_itsuka]

Name: Blood Stained Roses

Comments

[jaolynn]

AAH! What will Ryou do when he comes back? I'm scared! This keep getting better, more and more interesting! I can't wait to read more!

[yume_itsuka]

Hehe, I'm glad you think so! xD
and if you find anymore errors, pointing them out would be helpful =D
My friend proofread it for me, but then I ended up doing some of my own and rewrote quite a bit without editing what I redid because it's always a circle of rewriting... If that makes sense...

[jaolynn]

Oh sure I'll tell you if I catch them then. I usually don't worry about them too much cause I don't want to seem like I'm picking something apart, you know? I totally know what you mean though it is very hard to catch those little grammar errors, even after reading over it several times, and rewriting doesn't help! I definitely hear you there!

[yume_itsuka]

Thank you! And yes... those slippery little grammar errors... it's usually something stupid, too, like I forgot an S and I catch it two years later. xD

[jamie310]

Must have more(*_)