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cielmelodies January 7 2017, 22:39:00 UTC

You wrote this! Omg. I love this so much. It's not dark at all, no, but it defintely touches on the topics of self harm just enough to develop the story and characters well and you wrote about it so beautifully. Ahhhh love it love it love it <3

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lilly0 January 15 2017, 13:50:57 UTC
Haha, yes it was me :D I tried to make it less dark and more about their feelings, and I'm happy that it seems to work ♥
Thanks so much for your kind comment, and thanks for reading this huge one-shot!

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learashi January 8 2017, 00:01:09 UTC
I love, love, love this.
I thought I already commented at the exchange but I must have imagined it.
I adore vulnerable Jun and caring Sho. Plus Ohno and Nino are priceless.
They are so loving and teasing at the end.
*hugs*

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lilly0 January 15 2017, 13:50:18 UTC
Thanks so much for reading this, my friend! ♥
Hurt&comfort is one of my fav genres, so I was really happy to pick that up for an exchange :D

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koi_choshi January 8 2017, 14:51:00 UTC
I made it to the eeeeend!
How can it be that Sho has a rebel image but spouts the cheesiest lines (I had to cringe sometimes. Or maybe if I were Jun, I would throw shoes at him)? But that makes him endearing.

I'm so glad that whatever happened to Jun in the past was used in a good way when everyone found out about it. And he has become stronger. I'm happy for this character.

Sho-kitchen-fail appearance is always a treat.

Thanks for this!!

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lilly0 January 15 2017, 13:48:58 UTC
YES! Thank you for managing to read the whole thing. I know it's super-long ^^
Haha, cheesy Sho at his best. I just thought the image of him being a scandalous rapper while actually being all cheesy would be hilarious :D
Thanks so much for reading this!! ♥

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mae74 January 8 2017, 23:40:29 UTC
This was so good! I loved how Sho took care of Jun so gently. I want another chapter or epilogue 💜❤️

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lilly0 January 15 2017, 13:42:31 UTC
Thanks so much for reading this and leaving me such a sweet comment ♥
(I'm sorry for only replying now, I was really sick during the last days)

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little_slick12 January 11 2017, 17:43:55 UTC
OMG! My first visit back in months and this is the first thing I click on to read! I love it so so so much! Great job!
Cheesy Sho is my humorous weakness and Jun throwing his shoes is actually quite hilarious!
I just love how you wrote their personalities so well. 10/10 would read a hundred more times lol ^.^

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lilly0 January 15 2017, 13:45:39 UTC
Thanks so much for your lovely comment, my friend! I hope you are going to be around Lj more again? ♥
Yes, cheesy Sho at his best, right? :D It was really fun to write this fic <3

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