Me without you Chapter 10 (Junba, Sakumiya)

Feb 05, 2017 13:50

Title: Me without you 10/?
Pairing: Junba (main!), Sakumiya, Ohno/?, others possible
Rating: up to R
Genre: AU, romance
Plot: Although they are both young students at college, both the youngest brothers within three, and both part of high society, there are worlds between Jun and Masaki. Jun comes from a rich, traditional and conservative family, ( Read more... )

genre: au, l: multi-chapter, genre: romance, p: aiba masaki/matsumoto jun, genre: college, p: ninomiya kazunari/sakurai sho, series: me without you, genre: high society, genre: hurt&comfort, r: r

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rollingday_s February 6 2017, 13:37:44 UTC
I loved seeing how the two families fight in completely different ways! When Masaki starts throwing his stuffed animals at Satoshi I imagined the scene and I just lost it, by the way xD I also laughed a lot at Sho's expense. When he made sure to stomp on the ugly porcelain hahahahahaha (I feel you, Sho, I actually did something of the sorts myself once)

The Sakumiya is <3 And even Masaki's brothers realise the way he makes Jun feel <3 That's so cute <3

And then the ending o.o Poor Sho!! I need to know he's okay :( Or, wait, even better, maybe he could end up in the hospital and be nursed back to health by someone named Nino?

Thank you for the update! See you on the next chapter! :D

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lilly0 February 12 2017, 15:07:48 UTC
Thanks so much for your kind comment! ♥
You know, I've had this scene in my mind since I started writing this multi-chapter. I wanted to show how differently these two families fight and solve problems. Masaki and his brothers have their bad moments too, but they communicate better and know how to resolve things, while Jun and his brothers still need to learn this stuff.
Sho was so perfect for this scene imo. He is this cool and smart guy, but can turn a bit silly sometimes <3

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reiichun February 6 2017, 16:10:11 UTC
Finally I can catch up with this fic!
Seriously I just love this story so much that I read this in one go and can't help to wait for the next update since you gave the cliffhanger :(

Wow, the fight between Jun and Takuya was so intense that I cringed automatically when I read it, but Sho's part made me laugh XD
He's so clueless on how to handle the situation yet so cute, and the part where he stomped onto the porcelain to broke it more even though his shoulder was in hurt is so funny XDD

And it's interesting to see how Satoshi want Masaki to be more responsible and care about his grade when their family is known as a really laid-back one while the stoic family member, Takuya and Sho want to see Jun to get relax with his life.

And Sakumiya part is so cute XD
I can't wait to read more about them ❤💛

Thanks for writing this!

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lilly0 February 12 2017, 15:10:20 UTC
Thanks so much for catching up and for your lovely comment!! ♥
I'm happy to see you around! <3

The fight was pretty bad, wasn't it? Jun and his brothers still need to learn how to communicate better and how to solve problems. But with Masaki's help Jun slowly learns to stand up for himself. I'm so happy you liked the scene with Sho. I could imagine him so well in such a situation <3

You are also right with how the families actually want different things from their little brothers. Masaki is supposed to be more responsible. While Jun's brothers want him to loosen up and relax a bit.

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leiva21 February 6 2017, 18:11:24 UTC
Ouch, I hope Sho doesn't break any bones >.<

Ooooh fighting between siblings! To imagine Masaki and Satoshi having an intense fights, but I feel even if they fight, it's just a normal fight not something that can break their bond. In the end Shingo can't help himself can he? lols but he effectively manage to stop the fight with just being his adorable self XD

Meanwhile the fight between Jun and Takuya was really intense and scary! Jun is clearly being holding too much inside himself >.<

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lilly0 February 12 2017, 15:54:37 UTC
You are right, although Masaki and Satoshi fight they are able to settle it, they communicate way better than Jun and his brothers. Jun indeed bottled up too many feelings over the last years.
Thanks so much for your lovely comment! ♥

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leiva21 February 6 2017, 20:12:16 UTC
Ouch, I hope Sho doesn't break any bones >.<

Ooooh fighting between siblings! To imagine Masaki and Satoshi having an intense fights, but I feel even if they fight, it's just a normal fight not something that can break their bond. In the end Shingo can't help himself can he? lols but he effectively manage to stop the fight with just being his adorable self XD

Meanwhile the fight between Jun and Takuya was really intense and scary! Jun is clearly being holding too much inside himself >.<

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mae74 February 7 2017, 10:28:22 UTC
Oh no! Poor defenceless Sho......next chapter please 😊

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lilly0 February 12 2017, 15:55:13 UTC
Yes, poor Sho, this really was a bad chapter for him ^^
Thanks so much for your comment! ♥

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