Family Matters: Chapter 5

Jan 23, 2016 14:15

Title: Family matters ~ Chapter 5
Pairing: Jun, Masaki, Sho, Satoshi, Kazu (there are going to be additional side-characters though. No OCs.) I'm trying to give each of the five their well-deserves spot-light <3
Rating: PG
Multi-chapter
Beta: lover_youshould
Genre: family!AU in which Arashi are brothers :-) slice of life, a little drama (and I'm trying to add ( Read more... )

p: ot5 arashi friendship, genre: au, l: multi-chapter, r: pg, series: family matters, genre: family

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hsiahsirafzi January 23 2016, 14:31:36 UTC
yeayyy i'm really happy reading this fic. one because it is really interesting and second because it is long. so i am really satisfied when reading. hehehe. yeah i kind of agree with u that jun's pov is a little bit depressing. but i kinda suit him and the situation at the moment. well that is in my opinion. i bet u know better though. i have to admit that i'm attached to this fic already. i wonder if jun and sho is going to have more time together. probably because i'm sakumoto shipper but i love all of them indeed. talking about kazu i wonder what really happen with him and i'm more curious about what happen to them in the past. well gotta say that i'm anticipating the next chapter. thank you for writing

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lilly0 January 27 2016, 21:15:34 UTC
Thanks so much for your lovely comment!! ♥ I'm always really happy to read your thoughts on this! And I'm glad you like this story <3
I guess you are right. It's basically the place Jun is right now. He is worrying about a lot of things, and it might pull him down momentarily. (Oh, and don't worry, Sakumoto is my OTP. So, they will have quite some scenes together :-) )

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learashi January 23 2016, 22:23:39 UTC
Yes, Jun's POV is depressing, but it is kind of where he is emotionally at the moment. At least his close friends have remained loyal and look out for him. I like the way you give us further hints about happenings in the past (like Jun almost freaking out in the car) without spelling them out.
It was wonderful that he was able to interact with Sho in a good way for once, but I guess that will go out the window when Sho finds out about the rumor.
Kazu is worrying me more at the moment though...

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lilly0 January 27 2016, 21:17:27 UTC
Thanks so much for your comment, my friend ♥ I'm so happy you are following this story!!
Yes, you are right, it's basically the emotional place Jun is at right now (also there is a lot on his mind). So his thoughts and feelings are a bit more angsty.
Kazu's storyline will start soon... *hint*

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yukitsubute January 26 2016, 10:08:21 UTC
I totally love Jun hanging out with his friends. It's so nice to see that he has an almost normal social life. I don't have the feeling that his POV is depressing, for me it's Nino's part, which is most depressing and worrying. :(

Maou and Jun are totally sweet together, I love their interaction. <3

Oh, and finally Jun and Sho laughed together, at least for one time :P

Uncle Aiba and Uncle Ohno? *lol* Poor them <3

I can imagine Aiba loves his job at the bakery <3 I wouldn't stand all the children, but the job is cool :D

THanks so much for sharing, I am waiting for the next, and I hope nothing bad will happen to Nino.

<3

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lilly0 January 27 2016, 21:19:02 UTC
Thanks so much for your comment, dear!! <3

I can totally imagine Aiba loving his job too! (Baking cakes, and learning Spanish meanwhile :D)
I guess, Nino's part is indeed going to be a bit worrysome soon...

Thanks again for reading and commenting!! <3

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leiva21 January 26 2016, 15:25:04 UTC
Sorry for the lack of comments lately, I've been catching up ( ... )

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lilly0 January 27 2016, 21:22:38 UTC
Thanks so much for this beautiful and encouraging comment! It really means a lot to me! And I'm glad you like this story (and follow it) <3

The accident, well... there is a little more to it. *hint*

Writing Jun with his friends was really fun, but you are right, there is a lot going on in his mind now, and emotionally he is in a bit of a difficult place right now.

Also glad that you like Yama!twins. <3

Thanks again for reading and commenting! ♥

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