Family Matters: Chapter 19

[lilly0]

Title: Family matters ~ Chapter 19/22
Pairing: Jun, Masaki, Sho, Satoshi, Kazu (there are going to be additional side-characters though. No OCs.) I'm trying to give each of the five their well-deserves spot-light <3
Rating: PG
Multi-chapter
Genre: family!AU in which Arashi are brothers :-) slice of life, a little drama (and I'm trying to add some

Comments

[matsu1nino]

Another amazing chapter. I felt like I was right on the edge of my seat while reading, especially when the knife turned up.
Jun's patience never ceases to amaze me. No matter how many times he's yelled at or blamed unfairly or felt betrayed by his big brothers, he always gives them another chance. So glad Sho was understanding to him this time though.
Overdramatic is one word for this but I'd call it an emotionally suspenseful masterpiece of a chapter.
The ending is so cute too!

[lilly0]

Thanks so much for your lovely comment!! ♥
I'm really glad you liked this chapter because I thought it might be a bit too overdramatic :D Jun's really been at the receiving site of his brothers' anger quite often, though most of the time it wasn't even his fault. But as Sho is in his zen mode recently, he has at least someone helping him out :D

[learashi]

It's wonderful to see how much more mature Jun and Sho's relationship is now. Before they would have got into a big dramatic fight instead of talking things through. It's good that Kazu and Jun are back on somewhat better terms than they were. I loved them hanging out their windows talking to each other.
Shota must have been very confused by Jun's attitude towards him, but perhaps he will understand the reason behind it now.
Not overly dramatic. In my opinion it was just the right level of dramatic.
I'm starting to get sad because we are getting closer to the end all the time....
Thanks for another perfect chapter. 💜💜💜

[lilly0]

I'm so relieved this chapter worked. I wasn't really convinced by it and felt a bit uncertain that it might be too overdramatic ^^
Jun and Sho's relationship really got better gradually, now they can even talk openly to each other and Sho became so supportive :-)

Thanks so much for your lovely comment!! ♥

[genickph]

love love love!!!! this fic brings so much happiness to my otherwise gloomy day loving the family hug in the end and the whole sakumoto moment :) cant wait for the next chapter :)

[lilly0]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! ♥
I'm so happy you like this (and the Sakumoto morment of course <3)

[reiichun]

Wow, i feel so much progression in this chapter, especially Kazu :)
I didn't expect about Jun-Shota fight with the bullies, but it was such a nice turned up i think :) well at least they can understand each other more

While masaki has his buddha mode, sho has his zen mode XD i wonder what the rest of the brother has lol

And the ending is just so lovely! With them giving a bear hug to each other is so ♡
Amazing chapter! Definitely waiting for the next! :D

[lilly0]

I'm so happy you liked this ♥
I think Kazu really tries to be more responsible now, though it might not always work out the way he wants... but it is a huge progress, isn't it?
Haha, yes, we have now Buddha-Masaki and Zen-Sho :D I need to think of something for the others *lol*

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!! ♥

[yukitsubute]

Oh dear, poor Jun and Shota, they got in a really bad situation, but I am glad that Jun really made it, and the idea with the picture was a little stupid - yes, but it was also brilliant.

I love that Sho is now the one who is closest to Jun, even though he was always the one fighting with him :)

Ahhhhh grioup-cuddling in the end, I love them as family, they are so cute together, even though they have their problems with each other. They are family after all :D

I am looking forward to the next chapter, I wonder what happens next.

THanks for sharing this one, I really loved reading it

[lilly0]

Thanks so much for your comment, dear <3

Yes, weird how their relationships changed, right? Now Sho has suddenly found a whole new approach and is way more supportive.

There should be more family group cuddlings!! :D