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Jun 16, 2004 21:17

Oh god. Going back over the posts I made with the story in it I noticed all the grammatical errors, typos, generally crappy sentences. I think Im going to finish it and write a few drafts before I post any more on it. PLus Im kind of at a road block. There's going to be conversations in the story, and I dont know how to handle that. It would be ( Read more... )

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No biggie. spiderman2099 June 16 2004, 21:33:21 UTC

Yay! More story.

Don't worry about the errors. I think we can still get the gist of it.

I have the strength of a bear that has the strength of TWO bears!

muhammed June 16 2004, 22:07:03 UTC

Hear that? Yeah, that's the sound me summoning something from my EVIL JAR to come over there. Yeah, it's big and mean. Looks like, yeah, a skeleton, and wait, here come some Moblins, and hang on, yep there's an Octarok. They're on their way to Tampa right now! They're instructions are simple, bug the hell out of you to provide you with plenty of material to get past you're writers block. When they've returned to my EVIL JAR I'll know their task is complete and will expect the next installment shortly after.

MUUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!