[Fanfiction:] Too Much (One-Shot)

[yumiko_okahawa]

Title: Too much
Pairing: Tegomass
Genre: ANGST
Rating: Completely safe
Disclaimer: I wouldn't have to go to Sweden if I owned them, would I?
Summery: Tegoshi changed and didn't just lose himself in the progress, but also Massu

A/N: It's Tegoshi-centric.

That idea had been in my mind for months now. Certain sentences where disturbing me while writing on

Comments

[criminalscream]

Poor Tegoshi :(
I loved it!

[criminalscream]

My short comment is first xD

[yumiko_okahawa]

Hihi, yes it is ^_^ Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

[messiah_noire]

Please write a second part. It's so sad... ;__;

[yumiko_okahawa]

Kyaaaaaa~ I LOVE that icon, it amkes me laugh whenever I see it XD ^^

I'll probably do that ... since I don't like sad endings as well ^^;;

Thank you so much for the comment, hon <33333

[messiah_noire]

Yay, dorky Kyo! x) <3

Well, the second part wasn't that happy either. xD

You're very welcome! <3

[blazingeternity]

*sighs* oh how we always recognize the things we love once they're gone... oh how we always get aware of something going wrong once it's too late.
Maybe one of the reasons why I always enjoy your stories so much is because the 'problems' you write about are so very real, something that can happen to everyone in one way or another... or that we're afraid of. So to me this story is rather melancholic.

I'm not sure if I want to read a sequel to it since I like it as a oneshot... but I'd be interested in reading Massu's experience of this whole ;)

[yumiko_okahawa]

*happy*
Thanks for reading! I didn't think you'd be interested in that pairing, but well... I should have known it better v.v *drop*

However, thanks for the ice words, I'm glad you liked it ^^

The way Tegoshi changed is so... very obvious, in a way. Back then, when News started no one even knew his name and he was always put into the background. He didn't look pretty and he was just the "other kid", you know? I'm always amazed by how confident he got, how much he opened up himself and turned the speed up to get to the top.
He's not tehre yet, but well, he already changed so damn much and I was wondering if he ever noticed himself...? He must have *laughs*

That's an interesting idea, I'll keep that in mind. I like it the way it is as well, but tegomass usually deserves Fluff, so... well, this leaves me a bit dissatisfied.
We'll see if I'm going to write anything as a sequel or leave it just the way it is.
First of all I need to write FitB Chap 13... v_v"

*hugs you*
<333333333333

[blazingeternity]

Well, well, I'm honest and don't hide that neither Tegoshi nor Masuda give me anything ^^" but I know who they are, I know what they do... and so on... it's not like I totally don't know what this is about, so it's already interesting to read for me. And then, your stories are always so nice to read, how could I not?! =D

I'm sure he noticed it himself already... and if not on his own, then because others told him. I think you wouldn't only hear about it from your fans, but also from your family and friends at one point or another ^^ well let's hope he won't change for the worse in the future XD

Ah, if it deserves fluff or not, isn't it nice to have something completely different once in a while? x)

Oh yes, Chap 13 v.v I decided I'll read it in bed later tonight... so when I get a heart attack or faint or something, I won't fall down and hit my head or something xP @__@;;

*smooch* ~<3 *-*

[zxcvbnm109]

Loved the story, loved the angst, love the Tegoshi...xD

poor Tego...but Idk why, but I just like to read these angsty-sad stories...I think that you shouldn't write a sequel, cuz it's supposed 2 be a one-shot, and I just like sad-endings...xD

Tegoshi REALLY did change...from a little no-body-gives-a-damn-about boy, to a pretty, cute idol! xD

lol...remember his short hair?!?!...xD

but truthfully, I really dislike his hair now, it looks so ugh...did it get a perm?

anyways, great story! :)

[yumiko_okahawa]

Thanks so much for he comment! ^^

Yeah, by now, I don't want to write another ending and leave it like that. I'm only thinking about writing the same again from Masuda's POV... Probably XD ^^

He did, soooo much. I always find it so amazing and stunning how much he changed, not just from the otside, his looks, but also from his behaviour!

His short hair was cute XD But it didn't have any styling *laughs*
Well, I don't hink there's anything that can make him look ugly, so even though I dislike his current perm as well, I still think he's pretty. *laughs*
But I preffered the smooth and silk hair as well. I hope someone is going to tell him to change it back soon.

Thanks sooo much!! I'm glad you liked it ^_^

[konata15]

Loved it T~T Poor Tegoshi!! He lost Massu...

[yumiko_okahawa]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

[konata15]

No problem!