[Fanfiction:] Fade into the Background Chapter 13

[yumiko_okahawa]

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[kat_newsgirl]

My heart brakes for Jin. Even though he knew of the engagement it still must of really hurt when they walked in on the surprise engagement party.

I will hold you to that pinky promise.lol

Thanks for the update.

[yumiko_okahawa]

Yeees, I think that really was the worst thing to happen to Jin and I felt really bad for him while writing. In the end, he did a lot of mistakes and he was unfair to kazuya, but well... he doesn't deserve all that pain, after all.
v_v" Poor boy.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting ^_^ I'll hold that promise!

[blazingeternity]

*depressed* *dead* .____.

For once I go to bed early and it's 5 minutes before you put this up... now I've gotta go to Uni and I'll be gone for the whole fuckin' day.
Which means: I won't be able to read it before tonight O_O... which means: I'm going to run around all day worrying about Jin DDD:

THE TORTURE OH THE TORTURE *devastated* +.+

[yumiko_okahawa]

*takes you into a warm embrace*
Nooo~ don't be depressed ;________; I can't stand a depressed Lia-chan!
*gives you tons of Sunshine and Love and Cookies and Mai-dolls*

I'm going to write an SMS to you. Now.
Time will fly by today!!!!

*hugs tight*
<3333333

[blazingeternity]

*sighs*
Thank you so much for the message you sent me. I was in the middle of my lecture when I heard a faint 'toddiiieng' and reading your text really made me smile <3 so I kinda stopped worrying x) ...but as much as I appreciate sunshine and cookies and love and... Mai-dolls!? *__*; ...

...now that I finally read it I'm kind of devastated again. I was really able to feel how Jin felt/realized that Kazuya had finally slipped completely out of his hand and life. The point where there are neither hope nor worries anymore, where you don't make up plans of how to change the situation anymore, but are just left helpless and totally blank. A point of no return? I wonder how you're going to turn the ship as you promised. I know you can, I just don't have a clue how

[yumiko_okahawa]

Aaaw~ It was about half past 12 when I heard a loud "Toffiiiieng" and read your message XD But I was already sleeping, so I just read it and thought how cute you were and then I fell asleep again *laugh* v.v Gomen

[fionnakreuz]

I'm crying.

[yumiko_okahawa]

O_O
..... I'm sorry >.<" Please don't!

*hands you tissues and cookies*

[fionnakreuz]

The rain scene was beautiful. Though it was cliche, I can totally feel Jin's desperation and the tremendous grief that over took him with the surprise engagement party. T_______________T JIN DESERVES (no, actually the both of them) deserves a happy ending. I'm counting on you. :3

[yumiko_okahawa]

It was so cliche, but this story so deserved that cliche (in my opinion XD)!!

I won't disappoint you. Pinky Promise (I'll never shit... eh, cheat on you *coughes* .. Okay, that was old <.<)

^^
<333

[eikou_no_uta]

Omigaaawd *dies*

I REALLY thought for a second that they were going to get back together... but at the same time if they did there would be no wedding xD
I can't wait to see the next chapter *o*

[yumiko_okahawa]

Your icon suits hilarious well!!! *laughs*
Perfect!!!

Hihi, yeah, I'd love to get them together again, but.. well, not yet ^^

Thanks so much for reading ^___^

[aarime]

I HATE u koki... poor jin..in front of his eyes, he lost the one of his life and it is reaaly too late for them :(

Have I mentioned that i hate Koki?!?!?!
<3
looking forward to reading next chap

[yumiko_okahawa]

Naaah! Please don't say that! Koki's not at fault here! >_<" I think... he couldn't know, could he?

Thanks for the comment, however! ^^ <3