Somehow, this time, I don't really know what to say. Isn't it a nice chapter, actually? Following the last one so very well? A comfortable pace, almost like a slow dance, rather warm than cold feelings and for once things going upwards - yet, I feel despair?
I told you I was unsure about Minako and maybe you could read from my words that I wasn't really fond of still having her in the story. But I really, really liked how you bound her in like this, how you made her end this with her head held up, being accepting and determined, not completely devastated. Of course it's really sad for her how her image was completely destroyed in public, but it's obvious that she can deal with it and knows why this was said
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Yes, sorry @__@;; Of course I could always point out superficial things I like or don't like - but this time I thought there was nothing in depth for me to say... like sharing my thoughts on a development or specific feelings, order of events, whatever. That's probably because in general this wasn't too "new" and rather spinning on the yarn from the chapter before - which is good of course! XD
May I say that I wouldn't have expected anything less from you? ^^ You're such a kind person and you've put so much passion in this story, I didn't think you would simply drop or kick out a character you carefully created and involved (^-^)v
Yes, yes, of course Jin's not so impulsive anymore because he's more careful and calm and maybe tries to behave more rational. 8) Yet, because this chapter was rather from Kazuya's pov (feeling-wise) it feels as if Jin's lacking emotion, so this creates this kind of switch where he appears to be the one blocking out now XDD Now I wonder: Is he really just oh so very careful, or is he slowly resigning and
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i agree with everything ur first commenter said....
yumiko-chan....this is just... AMAZING... i'm speechless...this makes waiting worthwile...
It really makes me realize that AKAME isn't all about the hotness...tho i dont complain. they could truly be a real couple going through hard times like everybody else... but in the end... they still love each other
It really makes me realize that AKAME isn't all about the hotness...tho i dont complain. they could truly be a real couple going through hard times like everybody else... but in the end... they still love each other
Thank you so much for saying that. Actually, I started to write this fanfiction, because I was a little dissatisfied with how they were always just pictured as that and reduced to just sex. *laugh* So, reading that people like it this way as well, and that there are people who want them to be more than that as well, makes me really, really happy ♥
eh~~next chap would be the last??!!!! btw, i sincerely pity minako in this whole situation and it's so brave of her to still be able to accept things that's happening around her.. anyway, have to agree wth blazingeternity, i'm sensing less of akame interaction and jin's presence int this chap..anyhow, the first part of this chap was soo sweet..akame~~~~kya~~~ ^^ huhu, don't tell me you will not make them together at the last chap..huhu, though i realllllllyyyyy love angst, i want akame to be together i this fic ^^
Most likely. It depends on what is going to come to my mind *laugh* But, however, the whole story is coming to an end soon, I think.
Aw, everyone says it's less akame interaction in this chap XD But I guess this chapter has a lot of interaction, though. Not direct ones, but, well those invisible things. Like Kame staying so close to Jin in the morning for so long without Jin knowing; jin being understanding about Kazuya's relationship, close friendship with koki... they both changed and I wanted to show this change in this chapter! ^^
I won't tell you about the end, of course XD But, I can say that I'm planning something you will like ^.~
"something you will like" yatta!!!! anyway, regardless of me pointing out about the less akame interaction, i still love this chap..hell, i love this whole fic ^^ will, be waiting for the next chap ^^
argh! my emotions are confusing me, which side should i take? should i pity minako or should i rant at kazuya? omg...the update is really nice but it made me cry... im stil feeling bad at kazuya being banned from all activities, i was thinking is he gonna go depressed and commit suicide? lol...i hope not, i wonder what will happen with jin and kazuya's friendship...will it just stay like what it is or will it progress to something more.... im feeling really depressed over this. T.T
AHHH!!! *glomps you* this was an amazing chapter X_x omg kazuya's letter made me sad/glad + all these other random emotions! damn you Koki! >=O and poor Kazuya =/ will be waiting impatiently for the final(?) chapter!
Thank you! I'm glad you like this one ^_^ It actually took me ages to find out what Kazuya has written in the letter, to pick his words and expressions... ^^; And don't be mad at Koki! I think he's a really good friend for Kazuya! ^^
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Somehow, this time, I don't really know what to say. Isn't it a nice chapter, actually? Following the last one so very well? A comfortable pace, almost like a slow dance, rather warm than cold feelings and for once things going upwards - yet, I feel despair?
I told you I was unsure about Minako and maybe you could read from my words that I wasn't really fond of still having her in the story. But I really, really liked how you bound her in like this, how you made her end this with her head held up, being accepting and determined, not completely devastated. Of course it's really sad for her how her image was completely destroyed in public, but it's obvious that she can deal with it and knows why this was said ( ... )
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Of course I could always point out superficial things I like or don't like - but this time I thought there was nothing in depth for me to say... like sharing my thoughts on a development or specific feelings, order of events, whatever. That's probably because in general this wasn't too "new" and rather spinning on the yarn from the chapter before - which is good of course! XD
May I say that I wouldn't have expected anything less from you? ^^ You're such a kind person and you've put so much passion in this story, I didn't think you would simply drop or kick out a character you carefully created and involved (^-^)v
Yes, yes, of course Jin's not so impulsive anymore because he's more careful and calm and maybe tries to behave more rational. 8) Yet, because this chapter was rather from Kazuya's pov (feeling-wise) it feels as if Jin's lacking emotion, so this creates this kind of switch where he appears to be the one blocking out now XDD Now I wonder: Is he really just oh so very careful, or is he slowly resigning and ( ... )
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yumiko-chan....this is just... AMAZING...
i'm speechless...this makes waiting worthwile...
It really makes me realize that AKAME isn't all about the hotness...tho i dont complain.
they could truly be a real couple going through hard times like everybody else... but in the end... they still love each other
1000/10!!!
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they could truly be a real couple going through hard times like everybody else... but in the end... they still love each other
Thank you so much for saying that. Actually, I started to write this fanfiction, because I was a little dissatisfied with how they were always just pictured as that and reduced to just sex. *laugh*
So, reading that people like it this way as well, and that there are people who want them to be more than that as well, makes me really, really happy ♥
Thank you so very much!!
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A REAL COUPLE!!! :D:D:D:D:D
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btw, i sincerely pity minako in this whole situation and it's so brave of her to still be able to accept things that's happening around her.. anyway, have to agree wth blazingeternity, i'm sensing less of akame interaction and jin's presence int this chap..anyhow, the first part of this chap was soo sweet..akame~~~~kya~~~ ^^ huhu, don't tell me you will not make them together at the last chap..huhu, though i realllllllyyyyy love angst, i want akame to be together i this fic ^^
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But, however, the whole story is coming to an end soon, I think.
Aw, everyone says it's less akame interaction in this chap XD But I guess this chapter has a lot of interaction, though. Not direct ones, but, well those invisible things. Like Kame staying so close to Jin in the morning for so long without Jin knowing; jin being understanding about Kazuya's relationship, close friendship with koki... they both changed and I wanted to show this change in this chapter! ^^
I won't tell you about the end, of course XD But, I can say that I'm planning something you will like ^.~
Thank you so very much! ^^ <3
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my emotions are confusing me, which side should i take? should i pity minako or should i rant at kazuya?
omg...the update is really nice but it made me cry...
im stil feeling bad at kazuya being banned from all activities, i was thinking is he gonna go depressed and commit suicide? lol...i hope not, i wonder what will happen with jin and kazuya's friendship...will it just stay like what it is or will it progress to something more....
im feeling really depressed over this.
T.T
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I tend to make people cry v.v i'm sorry!
Suicide?? Waah, no way! I couldn't live with an end like that! *laugh*
I hope by the end of the story you won't be depressed anymore!! ^^ <3
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thank you
*sniffle*
i hope to read a cheery update next time.
♥♥♥
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omg kazuya's letter made me sad/glad + all these other random emotions!
damn you Koki! >=O
and poor Kazuya =/
will be waiting impatiently for the final(?) chapter!
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It actually took me ages to find out what Kazuya has written in the letter, to pick his words and expressions... ^^;
And don't be mad at Koki! I think he's a really good friend for Kazuya! ^^
Thanks so much! ^^
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if he didn't come ... ;_;
ahh jin better not accept being just friends with kazuya >=O
all that they've gone through X_x
*goes crazy*
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*gives you some sweets*
Don't go crazy! It's just a lame fanfiction after all, not worth going crazy over! ^^ <3
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