Comments | yumiko_okahawa: [Fanfic] Multi-Chap: Fade into the Background Prologue and Chapter 1

yumiko_okahawa

[Fanfic] Multi-Chap: Fade into the Background Prologue and Chapter 1

Dec 26, 2008 22:02

Okay, I needed to distract myself a bit, so I started a new project....

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nihonjin_tensai April 21 2009, 12:47:05 UTC

aaahhh~~ i told myself that i won't read this fic until it's finished XD because i feel that its filled with so much angst XD just reading the summary almost made me cry! haha~

thanks for this! will try to finish this as soon as possible(reading, that is. ahaha)

ganbatte kudasai~ :)

talkativehands June 5 2009, 14:49:23 UTC

Nice fanfiction you have here! ganbatte! hahah.
add me as a friend ne? :D i love akame also!
You write good fanfiction! :D
Read mine too? hahah.
I shall continue reading yours ne? :D

comment prologue xxasukixx August 11 2009, 15:56:30 UTC

Hi there~ ^_^

I'm a friend of naomi0211 and she recommended that FF to me when I visited her some weeks ago. Finally I started to read it.
It was worth it!

I really like it!
And that's just the Prologue. Amazing!! It's very suspensing and attention-catching. I want to know what's going on and why it is going on!
Ah and your writing style is nice (ok it's really just the prologue but that's my opinion until now...). It's easy to understand for me as a german, not too complicated. Nevertheless it seems as if you always find the perfect words which match with the situation. Nice!

I like the details you describe. Everything is white - just Jin wears a black suit. Everything shines and make a happy face - but Jin suffers inside. U_U
Such antitheses make the story interesting, I guess.

There's so much more I could write about, but my English sucks too much.
Is it ok with you if I start to comment in German beginning with the next chap even if the FF is written in English?

Nice greetings~

Re: comment prologue yumiko_okahawa August 11 2009, 16:07:02 UTC

Hey there ( ... )

Re: comment prologue xxasukixx August 11 2009, 19:05:27 UTC

Yes, we spent a great time. She's such a great person. I'm glad to be her friend. She talked so much about you and Brini, I'm looking forward to meet you sometime in future. :)
We talked about FFs and other creative works and then Audrey told me the whole story about this FF, hehe. It sounded very very interesting and so I decided to give it a try. It was a good decision. :DD

Ok, so next time look forward to a (long) german comment. <3

Thanks for the link! :)
Audrey gave me the whole FF as a Word Document. Is it the old version? If yes I will get those new chapters from your green-feelings account. ^^

:DDD You're welcome. <3 I hope you had a nice birthday?

*ggg* Yes, again! Audrey told me you are a big Tesshi fan. I like him too. <3
The icon is awesome, isn't it?

Re: comment prologue yumiko_okahawa August 11 2009, 20:07:04 UTC

She really is!!!! Definitely one of my favourite persons in this world ♥♥ *löl ( ... )

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comment First Memory xxasukixx August 14 2009, 16:19:31 UTC

Hi Shaina ( ... )

Re: comment First Memory yumiko_okahawa August 15 2009, 06:03:01 UTC

Tegomasu ♥♥♥ (Es ist Tegomasu Sommer, ich kann nichts dagegen tun... Tschuldigung XD ( ... )

sblocco navigatori anonymous February 16 2011, 10:44:42 UTC

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