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yuna_lockhart

Cloudfic!

Apr 17, 2006 09:31

Title:In the Breakdown
Fandom:Final Fantasy VII
Characters:Cloud, briefly Tifa
Prompt: 061: Winter
Word Count: 534
Rating: PG
Summary: Cloud finally lets himself react to the events at the Forgotten Capital
Author's Notes: No spoilers unless you're completely in the dark to the fandom and in that case this won't make any sense anyway :p (And it ( Read more... )

tifa, avalanche, cloud, fanfic100

Comments 8

nephilim April 17 2006, 15:52:41 UTC

I really liked this. :) Great imagery.

yuna_lockhart April 17 2006, 17:01:20 UTC

Aww thanks! :)

ami_kun April 17 2006, 19:54:37 UTC

I once got the hang of imagery. Now I completely suck at it. :/ Your work makes me cry. It's so real!

yuna_lockhart April 17 2006, 19:57:01 UTC

Oh my god that's the nicest thing anybody has ever said to me! *hugs* Thank you so much! (though sorry I made you cry!)

ardwynna_m April 18 2006, 15:44:45 UTC

That really captured something about grief setting in after shock. I like the end image of Cloud leaning on Tifa for support.

yuna_lockhart April 18 2006, 20:22:36 UTC

Thanks :) I hadn't originally planned on having Tifa in this at all, but she just kind of appeared and I felt like she needed to be there afterall, so I'm glad to hear it works :)

Together we will keep FFVII fiction alive!

In the Breakdown andersenmom July 19 2006, 19:58:36 UTC

What a great reaction. Really well done!

Re: In the Breakdown yuna_lockhart July 19 2006, 20:58:25 UTC

Thanks so much! Again--I also have a strange fascination with the aftermath of Aerith dying...even though I love her and still cry whenever I get to that point, it's one of my favorite things to write about :)