Comments | yuna_lockhart: Final Fantasy VII: Avalanche; 044: Circle

yuna_lockhart

Final Fantasy VII: Avalanche; 044: Circle

Apr 30, 2006 19:06

Title: The Waiting Line
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Characters: Cloud, Aerith, Tseng, Elena, Cid, Yuffie, Vincent, Tifa
Prompt: 044: Circle
Word Count: 623 average per scene, 8 scenes total)
Rating: R, for sex, language, and a hint of violence
Summary: Eight characters in eight short scenes depicting a daisy chain of changing relationships.
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tifa, cid, avalanche, cloud, fanfic100, elena, yuffie, aerith, turks, tseng, vincent

Comments 16

butterflys_fics May 1 2006, 01:05:34 UTC

You rock! The Yuffie/Vincent one was pretty cool! I mean, hello, they have to get on each other's nerves at times right? And they are my guilty pleasures OTP.

I am however also loving the Cloud/Tifa (of course) and the Tseng/Elena because face it, they are awesome as well.

yuna_lockhart May 1 2006, 01:23:13 UTC

:-p Thanks for reading! And I'm glad that my Vincent/Yuffie was up to par with a fan of that pairing :) I think you're right, I think they actually balance each other nicely...though I love Cid/Yuffie :) Thanks again!

butterflys_fics May 1 2006, 01:36:05 UTC

Hey, no problem!

And yeah, like you said in your last comment they are kinda like Squall and Rinoa in that way.

Cid/Yuffie is cute. He's just too funny, and so is she so that's a good combo.

piratelover81 May 1 2006, 02:08:27 UTC

Awww...where is the Aerith and Vincent one? lol..They are all really great though...good job...:)

yuna_lockhart May 2 2006, 02:05:45 UTC

Thanks!

Hmm, Aerith/Vincent...I'm working on a couple of other things right now, but what's one more? I think I may be able to do something with that pairing :p

piratelover81 May 4 2006, 04:54:22 UTC

-sqees like the fangirl I am- Oh awesome! I'd love to see that! VincentXAerith is my favorite obesssion for some strange reason....XD

emosasquatch May 1 2006, 03:27:34 UTC

Aww! Cloud/Tifa! <3 (Yes, I go for the obvious/canon. OMGNOES.)

Nice work ^_^

yuna_lockhart May 2 2006, 02:06:38 UTC

Thanks :)

Lol Cloud/Tifa is SO canon :p

Okay so maybe only in my mind...but still. The Family=teh win :p

misfire_ May 1 2006, 04:35:11 UTC

very nice, i liked them all... though you already know which was my favorite. :)

great characterization of all the characters/situations. you did a great job!

yuna_lockhart May 2 2006, 02:10:58 UTC

Thanks lady :p

Lol I hope I met your standards with that particular pairing...though really, they were one of the easiest ones to write. In my mind she'll always go home to Cloud...but hey...if Cloud isn't there Vincent seems like a good person for her to rely on :)

splendidshadows May 1 2006, 14:09:23 UTC

Very nice flashfics. ^_^ Vincent/Tifa and Cloud/Tifa were my favs! But I bet you can tell which pairing I liked best. ;)

The dialogue for Cid/Yuffie was great, and Vincent/Yuffie was different. Awesome job on all these! <3

yuna_lockhart May 2 2006, 02:14:56 UTC

Thanks! Tifa is by far the easiest character for me to write, though putting her with Vincent was quite new :) And I'm a big CidxYuffie fan...even though they're both so hot-headed I think it plays well. But hey, everyone needs a crack!pairing :p VinxYuffie was just how the daisy chain fell, it was tricky (though scene 4 was the hardest), but I hope it worked :)

Thanks again!