Comments | yuniebaby: LJ Idol Exhibit B Week 0

yuniebaby

May 09, 2013 16:32

This is my fictional introduction to waveform_delta

( One of those days . . . )

Comments 11

sweeny_todd May 12 2013, 09:56:42 UTC

I cook like that sometimes - I just don't want to, but I need to use everything. nice description!

cheshire23 May 12 2013, 16:41:59 UTC

This is such a lovely slice of life.

myrna_bird May 12 2013, 23:29:20 UTC

What a nice pleasant glimpse of a day in the life. Man! That spaghetti sounds good!

halfshellvenus May 13 2013, 18:08:53 UTC

This was a really lovely vignette-- so human, so real, and I felt better for him by the ending once the world had found a little kindness. :)

alycewilson May 13 2013, 20:59:49 UTC

Now I'm hungry! I liked your vivid use of detail.