Ok, first of all let me tell you: YOU'RE A DAMN GOOD WRITER.
I tend to literally put myself in the character's shoes of every fic/book/story I read and I've read lots; sometimes it's kind of difficult to connect with someone's writing, to get totally transported and feel identified in one way or another (I hope i'm not cofusing you orz)...Anyways, there's something about the way you portray your (muse) feelings, it makes it so much better and I love it 'cause there are very few fic writers that can do that nowadays. So yep, thank you <3
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That means a lot. I think that is of the biggest flatteries if not the biggest that a writer can get and I mean writer in the sense that I write as in type cause still the term feels way too big. But to be able to transport her readers the character's world and make them feel as the character's do. I always wonder if my readers read and see what I'm watching in my head when I write the scenes. Then if they can feel the pain. Maybe not because you have experienced it yourself, but because you know it somehow. For example when Joongie was leaning against the wall, hiding among the coats and he feels like a wounded soldier, I wonder if you did imagine that soldier in the middle of the trechs crying his heart out as he sees his partners's corpses all around him. I don't know how that's like, but I can imagine the desperation. Jaejoong felt that desperation and pain too.
I can't forgive you for playing our hearts and tears. I really feel like taking a gun and killing Yunho and that bitch family...including the kids. If Jae can't have him, no one else can...so better take them all out...they don't deserve to live.
Sorry but I feel terrible because of this.
Anyway, I'm happy that all is a dream...otherwise I will get my pitch fork and poke you to rewrite it.
you would have loved the other version of this chapter. I did a very ghoulish scene where Jae slices Jihyun and Yun also dies. I'm serious. I still have it if you're interested. But then I thought what the hell? This is not my YunJae T___T even if it was a dream, psycho Joongie would be too traumatizing for him. So this was much better, believe me.
More clutery to poke me and kill me, I need insurance!!
So many overwhelming emotions. I had an idea it was a dream, but it's seemed so real ;____; I'm just so happy now, regardless if you messed with our minds. Jaejoong's pain. So heart breaking, I honestly cried. Thank you for the update, babydoll!
you're welcome bb. Thank you for waiting :) I know! I worried about the realness, I wanted to write it in first person from Jae's POV so it could have another type of feeling that wouldn't match with the rest of the story, but then it was weird. So I figured it'd be a great relieve when you found out it was a dream even if it hurt bad. Evil author-ssi indeed.
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It's time for me to go to sleep but I promise I'll write a proper review later.
Oh boy... my feels orz.
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I tend to literally put myself in the character's shoes of every fic/book/story I read and I've read lots; sometimes it's kind of difficult to connect with someone's writing, to get totally transported and feel identified in one way or another (I hope i'm not cofusing you orz)...Anyways, there's something about the way you portray your (muse) feelings, it makes it so much better and I love it 'cause there are very few fic writers that can do that nowadays. So yep, thank you <3 ( ... )
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That means a lot. I think that is of the biggest flatteries if not the biggest that a writer can get and I mean writer in the sense that I write as in type cause still the term feels way too big. But to be able to transport her readers the character's world and make them feel as the character's do.
I always wonder if my readers read and see what I'm watching in my head when I write the scenes. Then if they can feel the pain. Maybe not because you have experienced it yourself, but because you know it somehow. For example when Joongie was leaning against the wall, hiding among the coats and he feels like a wounded soldier, I wonder if you did imagine that soldier in the middle of the trechs crying his heart out as he sees his partners's corpses all around him. I don't know how that's like, but I can imagine the desperation. Jaejoong felt that desperation and pain too.
Thank you for you support my darling.
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Sorry but I feel terrible because of this.
Anyway, I'm happy that all is a dream...otherwise I will get my pitch fork and poke you to rewrite it.
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More clutery to poke me and kill me, I need insurance!!
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I know! I worried about the realness, I wanted to write it in first person from Jae's POV so it could have another type of feeling that wouldn't match with the rest of the story, but then it was weird. So I figured it'd be a great relieve when you found out it was a dream even if it hurt bad. Evil author-ssi indeed.
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just hope that after all they've been through they can finally have their happy ending!
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