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masquedtears October 10 2011, 17:02:27 UTC
wow.. this is just.. wow.

it's kinda of beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time.

"so when he came along, she fought him. there was no other battles in her past that she waged as hard as this war with the handsome knight (a scar on his right cheek, a seasoned proof that he was no stranger to the battles waged in this cruel time. his hands, his hands held a hole in each palm that spoke of tortures too terrible to retell. a crown of thorns he wore on his head, king of an otherworldly kingdom.)"

the best lines.♥
thank you for sharing.

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yunsias October 10 2011, 18:21:46 UTC

ahhh i didn't think that someone will read this ;___;

to be really honest, i was feeling really upset last night and so i just randomly wrote something to vent my feelings but the more i write, the more happy i felt because i suddenly realized how loved i actually was. so thank you for your comment ♥

and i'm glad you picked my favorite lines because the handsome knight reminded me of someone i really love.

thank you once again for this comment and i hope this made you smile :)

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masquedtears October 10 2011, 20:48:47 UTC
haha, it's a beautiful piece.

this is actually one of the few that even if it was short, it really struck something you know? i could relate. ^^

i'm sorry to hear that you were upset and i hope you feel better. on paper, the world doesn't seem so bad doesn't it?

keep smiling. (:

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yunsias October 11 2011, 18:33:45 UTC

on paper and in reality, the world doesn't seem so bad to me :)

i'm just curious, how did you come to this post? because i don't think we're lj friends :)

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