Nobless Oblige for Demoerin

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I apoligize for being so late, I was waiting on this submission. A masterlist will be up tomorrow.

Title: Nobless Oblige (or, I Knew That the Lights of the City Were Too Heavy For Me)
Recipient: demoerin
Paring: Kyoko/Haru
Rating: R
Words: ~2500
Warnings: Violence, Disfunctional relationships, Alternate continuity, Experimental characterization, Torture,

Comments

[demoerin]

Don't worry that this is late, it's just good to have it! I like the sense of desperation for each other comes that comes through the whole fic. It's a little heart-breaking to see the sweeter moments that they've had to give up, like when they can't even keep going to the same pastry shop but the bittersweetness is lovely too.

Kyoko can pinpoint her movements down to the minute (Though this will never be an exact science. Haru is erratic and unpredictable for all that Kyoko trusts her to be so.)
That's so very Haru. ♥

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Ah, thanks for being understanding and not trying to skin me alive. This has been a half-finished document on my computer forever, but I finally forced myself to just sit down and write all the difficult parts.

Yeah, they're just trying to be happy, but it's always so difficult when they have to keep moving around form place to place. Even without those things, however, they are at their happiest by the other's side. It's hard to tell if that will last too long after this piece (I'd like to think so) but somewhere along the line one of them might find a reason to stay.

I love writing Haru, she's a lot of fun. Kyoko's a bit more difficult.

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked this piece.

[anonymous]

I love this piece. So beautifully written (Not to mention it IS my yuri OTP) and you perfectly describe their pain and how they find comfort in one another. Just beautiful.

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Ah, thank you very much for the comment! I'm quite glad that you enjoyed it. (Haru/Kyoko is my yuri OTP as well, so I really enjoyed writing this.)