oh, this is so cute i'm thinking about"Yamada walked out with the hotels yukata, slightly opened on the chest and having a towel around his neck as he wiped his wet hair dry.". So hot, ne~ and it made me blushed, Chinen too XD If they share room again, I'll blushed more because of your fiction ^^. Like it ^^
This is totally adorable! I squealed from the start to the end! I love it! Awesome! Aaaaah! Words can't describe how much I love it! The "marriage part" was so hilarous xD Yama-chan saying "not YET"<333
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~!!! >w< I AM SO HAPPY TO HEAR THAT XDD #$*%^$#*(^&%(*HUGS!* and LOL glad that u noticed that, i even made it in CAPS XDDD and thank you so much for reading and commenting <33 YAMACHI IS LOVE XD
hi,er.....well,aft reading tis,i kind of duno wat 2 comment.i m not sure whether it is bcuz of ur fic o just bcuz i haven't comment 4 such a long time.
hah, i think it isn't oni ur eng tat is improving ne~ur fics' rating is oso improving as well.lol.well,they always giv me the impression of bein cute & innocent(compare 2 jrock, of course), so it is really difficult 4 me 2 accept the intimate reaction btwn them.wow,i m the 1 tat r blushing wen i read tis.haiz.
arghh, i really dunno wat 2 say.hmm, so yamada is the real "man" in their relationship.tat's good.& yes, i like the ending too--"You’re mine, Yuri. No one can ever take you away from me. This is our moment. Yamachi moment.”it makes me think of a little boy who try 2 act brave & mature & promise 2 protect his bro.
i try 2 b not too serious but guess i fail agn.haiz.i still think tat yuri is prettier than taiga.hmm~
I read this one shot yesterday, but I didn’t have time to comment upon. I am going to do that now. This one shot is a delight. My hearts jumps when I think about it. There is so much love …You’re a really good writer .
“Hushh..” Yamada placed a finger on Chinen’s lips, “I know Chinen, I do.”He smiled warmly and pushed Chinen down to the bed again, “====================Yamada is so attractive. If only I were Chinen. He is very lucky… LOL
“I promise I won’t do anything to you, so please, Chi, please don’t be so aware of me.” Yamada whispered in Chinen’s ear, giving him a shiver==============Ryo-chan is sexy. I’m just dying. I understand Chinen’s fear. Yamada is a danger, but a sexy danger. “If the light is off,” he pulled Chinen’s face closer to his, “I’ll be missing all this good time enjoying myself watching you.”===========I want a boyfriend who will say to me things like that. I looooooooooooooooooooooove this one shot. It is excellent, you aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaare excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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i'm thinking about"Yamada walked out with the hotels yukata, slightly opened on the chest and having a towel around his neck as he wiped his wet hair dry.". So hot, ne~
and it made me blushed, Chinen too XD
If they share room again, I'll blushed more because of your fiction ^^.
Like it ^^
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yamada is certainly HOT especially in front of Chinen XD *SHOT*
ooo >w<~~~
I do hope they will share rooms together again again and AGAINNNN XDDDD
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IM LATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
MY COMMENT LATER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3333333333333333333
*GOES TO READDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD*
YURI CHAN I MISSED YOU!!!! <333333333
THX FOR THIS,~~~!!!
*HUGS HUUGS*
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and NUUUUUUUUU U ARE NOT LATEEEEE
WILL WAIT FOR UR COMMENTTTT THENNNNNN XDD
I MISS YOU TOO
I MISS YOU SO MUCH SO MUCHHHHHHHHH *GLOMP*
I LOVE YOU I MISS YOU *HUGHUGHUGSSSSS*
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YAMACHII!!!!!!!!
This is totally adorable! I squealed from the start to the end! I love it! Awesome! Aaaaah! Words can't describe how much I love it!
The "marriage part" was so hilarous xD Yama-chan saying "not YET"<333
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I AM SO HAPPY TO HEAR THAT XDD
#$*%^$#*(^&%(*HUGS!*
and LOL glad that u noticed that, i even made it in CAPS XDDD
and thank you so much for reading and commenting <33
YAMACHI IS LOVE XD
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Wanna make a marriage fic because of that xD
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yamachi marriage#$^&*%#()$*^ FLAILSSSSS XD
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hah, i think it isn't oni ur eng tat is improving ne~ur fics' rating is oso improving as well.lol.well,they always giv me the impression of bein cute & innocent(compare 2 jrock, of course), so it is really difficult 4 me 2 accept the intimate reaction btwn them.wow,i m the 1 tat r blushing wen i read tis.haiz.
arghh, i really dunno wat 2 say.hmm, so yamada is the real "man" in their relationship.tat's good.& yes, i like the ending too--"You’re mine, Yuri. No one can ever take you away from me. This is our moment. Yamachi moment.”it makes me think of a little boy who try 2 act brave & mature & promise 2 protect his bro.
i try 2 b not too serious but guess i fail agn.haiz.i still think tat yuri is prettier than taiga.hmm~
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LOL U BLUSHING?? SERIOUSLY?? XD
it's YAMACHI
of course it's CUTE, SWEET and LOVEEEE <333
thanks so much for ur complement m(_ _)m
and lol it's okay~
it's ur way of replying
and i still love both of them the way they are :D
thanks for commenting! XD
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This one shot is a delight. My hearts jumps when I think about it. There is so much love …You’re a really good writer .
“Hushh..” Yamada placed a finger on Chinen’s lips, “I know Chinen, I do.”He smiled warmly and pushed Chinen down to the bed again, “====================Yamada is so attractive. If only I were Chinen. He is very lucky… LOL
“I promise I won’t do anything to you, so please, Chi, please don’t be so aware of me.” Yamada whispered in Chinen’s ear, giving him a shiver==============Ryo-chan is sexy. I’m just dying. I understand Chinen’s fear. Yamada is a danger, but a sexy danger.
“If the light is off,” he pulled Chinen’s face closer to his, “I’ll be missing all this good time enjoying myself watching you.”===========I want a boyfriend who will say to me things like that.
I looooooooooooooooooooooove this one shot. It is excellent, you aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaare excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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and fhdjlahhhdjafh your compliments. OMGGGG I AM HAPPY XDDD
BOTH of them are lucky to have each other LOL
sexy-ly danger...LOL XD
and yes yes YESH ME TOO XDDDDD
fhjakfgkakjghdjaksdha;sdghka thank youuuuuuu <3333
I gained lots of confident from you fhdkghakfa thanks :D
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