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[April's Fool] - Chapter Three - Mildred

Aug 18, 2009 20:20

Chapter Two
( He backed out from the TARDIS and onto the street, staring at the blue box from every angle, and then slowly went back through the wooden doors, shock evident on his face. )

c:doc10, c:jackharkness, fanfic, c:gwencooper, c:fai, s:doctorwho, f:aprilsfool, p:kurofai, u:au, c:syaoran, c:sakura, c:iantojones, s:tsubasa, c:toshikosato, s:torchwood, c:yuuko, c:mokona, c:kurogane

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hoticered August 18 2009, 20:31:58 UTC

B'AAAAW. I LOVE YOU FAI.
Adorable chapter. Goddamn adorable. Jack lookin for a little sumthin sumthin from Fai, ey? ...Silly man whore, Fai-Fai is for Kuro-wan. Gonna have to watch his back around Kuro-pii. :D
(stops rambling) As always, another superb chapter! Keep it up! <333

yuui_nyanko August 18 2009, 20:32:48 UTC

Jack gets his Fay-Fay xP

I'll try~~! Thankyou for the lovely comment ^w^

youkohiei_fan August 18 2009, 22:55:56 UTC

XDDDDD oh god, this was priceless...

I don't know which is funnier Fai flirting, or Fai making Kurogane feel awkward. I keep thinking of Fai mentioning to the others that the others are his kids XD I think it was calling Kurogane 'daddy' at the end.

yuui_nyanko August 26 2009, 13:41:20 UTC

why haven't I replied?!

Fay flirting... he does it enough to Kurogane, right? XD I just wanted me a little FayJack to go on

lucatuna August 26 2009, 13:39:13 UTC

XD good job! i loved it and can't wait for the next chappie~

'mildred', *laughs*

anyway, good job regardless. keep up the awesome work!

yuui_nyanko August 26 2009, 13:39:57 UTC

I think I'm meant to be updating this today...

I just don't have the energy xD

lucatuna August 26 2009, 13:59:49 UTC

yay! *runs to read it*

awwww D: