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[April Fool's Fic Challenge] - Maneki Neko

Apr 01, 2011 00:16

Here is my fic, for lieraantoinette
C:
hope you like it :D

I'm so totally nervous that I did it wrong.... I told my friend about this just after I accepted the prompt and she dared me to do it totally serious and without crack so like... yeah....

It turned out kinda gruesome, but I had fun C:

Here it is...

Title: Maneki Neko
Words: 3118
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l:oneshot, p:kurofai, u:au, c:sakura, c:syaoran, s:tsubasa, fanfic, c:fai, c:tomoyo, c:yuuko, c:kurogane

Comments 5

mikkeneko April 4 2011, 03:58:05 UTC

Oh... This made me so sad! ;_; I knew trouble was coming as soon as the makeup started fucking around on him, but I never thought it would be Kurogane who had to strike the killing blow. *sob* Too well done...

yuui_nyanko April 4 2011, 17:56:18 UTC

r-really? Wow, thank you ;;; that means a lot to me, I've been fretting for days because I went in such a different direction to the other participants...

I can't wait to read the other entries C: unfortunately I don't have time just now but the ones I've seen are FANTASTICALLY funny.

maijame April 8 2011, 17:10:08 UTC

I liked it, really like it, despite the disturbing ending ( ... )

yuui_nyanko April 10 2011, 13:44:23 UTC

OH, god, yes how could I forget?! X__X goddamn... I feel very silly now;;; I think I was probably over-focused on kabuki and the demon split-narrative.... I won't remove that part just yet as I am not really up for thorough editing, but I will tweak it a little C:

Thank you for commenting C: you are very right, of course, and it was a huge oversight of mine. I just think that I was remembering all of the other kinds of stories I've read where women in power unnerved some people... x__x your words will stick with me and I will make sure to not make such an error in future :) And, of course, I'm very glad that you liked it despite my fail!

maijame April 10 2011, 19:00:18 UTC

I know the feeling of being influenced by something you read, especially if there's more than one story, so don't beat yourself up about it. ^^°

It stood out so much, because you were otherwise really authentic (or at least I felt you were, I don't really know anything firsthand about Kabuki). But I'm glad you're planning to edit it some time.

*goes off to check out your new post*