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yuumei_nata

Sweet Babe Heart Beat Break Me Down

Feb 17, 2009 20:09

Title: Relax
Pairing: Ryokura (Nishikido Ryo x Okura Tadayoshi)
Rating: R
Warnings: UST (unresolved sexual tension) (<-well this is a first :D)
Disclaimer: Sadly, I only own my own imagination.
Summary: Ryo. Okura. TORN. ('nuf said)

( Torn-Porn here (or so he wishes) )

fanfiction

Comments 11

ryoshige February 18 2009, 01:57:41 UTC

ahaks...
soo good to read that this tym ohkura is the master..
act good to know that ryo is now a slave LOL
i must say this is soo seductive hun..
ahaks...
love it <33

yuumei_nata February 18 2009, 15:36:00 UTC

Well, Ryo obviously is the girl in the dance so it's only natural that Okura gets to be the man off-stage too *evil grin*

Thanks ^^

ryoshige February 18 2009, 01:57:57 UTC

first???
*yay*

tinahyena February 18 2009, 21:16:01 UTC

OMG!!! this was really hot. It never gets old.

yuumei_nata February 19 2009, 13:20:27 UTC

Thank you ^^

yamapilovergyal February 18 2009, 22:09:41 UTC

O.O wooooooow.
soo good! and HOT.
heheh XD <3

yuumei_nata February 19 2009, 13:21:06 UTC

Glad you liked it ^^ Thank you for commenting!

bubbalooee9 July 1 2009, 11:53:09 UTC

WOW. You are my new god..seriously that was so freaking hot I can't even see straight right now!!!! I'm so so grateful to you for sharing..thank you thank you. Awesome work...feel free to write more Ryo/Kura....lol :)

yuumei_nata July 1 2009, 13:06:06 UTC

Um uh thank you :DDD I usually have trouble writing scenes like these so I'm glad it came out hot and not just incredibly awkward :D

Thank you for reading, liking and commenting ♥

bubbalooee9 July 4 2009, 11:55:20 UTC

Oh god...it wasn't awkward at all...really really great :)

yuumei_nata July 6 2009, 07:22:47 UTC

I have TORN to thank for this and I bow down to the person who came up with the coreography :D It's really ...inspiring xD they really know what makes the fangirls happy :Dv

And thank you again~