Brigits_Flame: All-Stars Mini-Contest Week #1 JFF

[yuunaluna]

Title: Scenting Fear
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Zarek Montag, Thessaly Intisar, Ewan
Universe:Aldamar
Pompt: Take the Cloth

Comments

[belluminabyssus]

Zarek is a wonderfully charismatic character, and I always enjoy reading about him. I liked how in this piece, you branched out, worked with a ton of characters at one time, and yet still kept the focus on Zarek and his mission.

I'm also pretty sure this is the lengthiest piece you've submitted! Wheee!

[yuunaluna]

Dude. It was so weird working with other characters who are like static little pieces of nothing in the long run. I at least had the decency to jot their names down somewhere so I wouldn't TOTALLY forget about them, but it was still strange. I guess it's just a sneak peak into what writing the majority of my book is going to be like, considering that's how RL works as well, but my oh my.

[belluminabyssus]

Haha you'll get used to it!