Fic - White Collar - The Bond Forger

Nov 22, 2010 21:29

Fandom: White Collar
Pairing(s): Lauren Cruz/Diana Berrigan
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~6,700
Spoilers: through the beginning of Season 2
Summary: When Cruz was on the show I missed Diana. Now Diana’s back and I kind of miss Cruz. Look how much better it would be if we had them both.

The Bond Forger )

lauren/diana, white collar

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anna_sinistra November 23 2010, 04:04:07 UTC
That was amazing, why is this not reality?

*favourites*

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zoicite November 23 2010, 10:23:56 UTC
I didn't even know I wanted this to be reality until I sat down and thought 'this might be fun to write' but now I SO DO. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the feedback :D

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accrues November 23 2010, 05:03:26 UTC
“I think you’re coming across as someone who is attracted to who someone is and not necessarily what they’ve got in her pants,” Diana said carefully.

ksldajflskjfd;lkasjdf this.

Wow, this fic, is amazing. I am not usually one for femslash (I think it calls a little too close to home for me, haha) but dude, this was goood. All of the characterisations, the idea of sexuality (from a girl who is of the 'it's fluid!' persuasion), wow. Brilliant!

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zoicite November 23 2010, 10:54:57 UTC
Thank you so much! I haven't really written much femslash, which was sort of the point of giving this story a shot in the first place, and I ended up having a lot of fun with it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D

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eirenical November 23 2010, 05:37:08 UTC
OK... I'm not even a fan of Lauren Cruz (mostly because she replaced Diana :-P), but I think this may have made me one. ^_^

Jones jumped a little when the door to Burke’s office shut behind them. When he looked up he caught Lauren watching.

“I hate you,” he mouthed before going back to his work.

Love. Lovelovelove. *_* And really... a little bit in love with each other? ;D

Lauren smiled, and when she caught herself smoothing the hair she’d pushed behind her ear she thought that maybe she was flirting just a little bit now too.

I like how you captured the fact that flirting between women is so much more subtle than it is between men. I also love how Lauren's got a little bit of a "my hero just stepped down off the pedestal to flirt with me" kind of thing going on here. ^_^

“Have you ever tried to keep anything from an office full of FBI agents?”

*snickers* Awesome. ^_^

“The only person who won’t know about this by the end of the week is Burke. And that’s only because Burke’s preoccupied with Caffrey and his wife is ( ... )

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zoicite November 23 2010, 11:11:36 UTC
I wasn't the biggest fan of Cruz either, for much the same reasons. Turns out she's kinda fun to write! Thanks so much for the feedback!!!

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deepbluemermaid November 23 2010, 12:03:11 UTC
Yay, WC femslash! This is delicious and delightful :)

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zoicite November 24 2010, 13:16:27 UTC
thank you! :D

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cantarina1 November 23 2010, 22:48:53 UTC
This is gorgeous! I love the slow but palpable build between Diana and Lauren and your adorable, adorable Jones.

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zoicite November 24 2010, 13:16:08 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! and thanks so much for the rec! :D

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