Fic - Hair - When We Were Caught (1/2)

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Fandom: Hair
Pairing: Claude/Berger
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~17,200
Summary: Berger smuggles Claude off to Canada, eh.
Notes: Overlaps with The Lost and Found, though both stories can stand alone (and this is written in a different tense than its counterpart, oops).

Comments

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I am loving this. *_* ^_^ *_* The scene on the bus was hysterical. *snickers* Not just one name pun, but two! And Berger wearing Claude's headband... *squee!* Claude, honey, if you don't realize that that's Berger's way of telling you you're stuck with him... *shakes head*

And Claude's mom figuring out he was in love starting off that whole train of panic-ridden thoughts about Berger... Oh. Oh, Claude. O_O Poor baby. But you angst so pretty... ^_^ I can't help loving you that way.

This was all fantastic and totally worth the wait and if I wasn't so damned drugged up on Nyquil, I'd do better with commenting.

*happy sighs* *goes back to reading*

Oops! One more thing. ^_^ The whole bit where Claude realized that Berger, who plans nothing, not only planned this but researched it... *_* OMG, serious breath catch at that one. Love. Lovelovelove.

OK. Now, I'm done. Going to read part 2. ^_

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Thank you! I'm glad it turned out to be worth the wait!

And yeah, Berger essentially indicates that he's totally in love with Claude like 16,000 times in this story. Claude is just apparently very dense. Aw, Claudio.

And hee! sorry that the bag thing turned out to be nothing at all! ;)

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It totally did! And just so you know, it's not your fault that I couldn't sleep last night. And it's definitely not your fault that every time I woke up again, that I couldn't resist reading the story just one more time. And it's definitely not your fault that by the time I finally was able to stop and actually fall asleep that it was nearly 5 AM.

I nearly texted you to say "Good Morning" and squee in person. Just saying. ^_~

He totally does! Claude is just so wrapped up in his own angst that he doesn't notice. O_O Which is so totally Claude.

LOL. No sweat. ^_^ There was so much other wonderful stuff going on in here that I honestly didn't miss it. ^_^

And, OMG, Claude and Berger in front of a fireplace. And in a barn. *_* Freaking awesome.

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Hm. I sense that all of the above might somehow be my fault...Oops! And yeaaah, I definitely WOKE UP at 5 am this morning so that text would have been apt!

As I was writing the barn scene i started to wonder if the setting was a little too bad gay porn...then i decided I didn't really care. ;)