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Fic :: Pretty Little Liars :: Transference

Jul 11, 2011 23:33

Fandom: Pretty Little Liars
Pairing: Hanna/Emily
Word Count: ~2,500
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Takes place after 1x10
Summary: "What was it like?" Hanna asked. "Kissing Alison?"

( Transference )

pretty little liars, hanna/emily

Comments 9

lilover12 July 12 2011, 06:06:45 UTC

lovely..can u do some more please..

zoicite July 13 2011, 00:13:28 UTC

Thanks! I really enjoyed writing this, so it is possible there may be more where this came from down the line. :)

flister July 12 2011, 19:39:57 UTC

That. Was. Brilliant!! My favourite pairing and, not only that, but it was so perfectly done.

You know, it's not all that easy to write a straight character as a sympathetic potential gay one, but here I completely believe Hanna. Does that make sense? And I can picture this whole thing, you've written it so well.

Character and tone were spot on. I adored this. Like, really. Thanks so much for writing it!!

zoicite July 13 2011, 00:15:48 UTC

wow, thanks so much for the feedback. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'm watching the show for the first time (I actually haven't seen past the first 5 minutes of 1x11 yet) but had to pause to try writing this while it was in my head. So glad to hear that it was in character and believable! :D

eirenical July 12 2011, 20:32:04 UTC

You. Are an enabler. I had no idea what was going on, but I read it, anyway, because it was something you wrote and you promised girl kissing.

Aw...! Very cute. And now I'm intrigued enough that I want to know who these people are. And who poor Maya is who's kind of getting cheated on a little, it sounds like. Still... very cute. ^_^ And when you described the drawn swirlies covering up the words, I totally pictured the swirlies you drew on your Hair icons. ^_^

zoicite July 13 2011, 00:11:59 UTC

Ha! Dork. But thanks for reading, even though you had no idea what was going on!

Maya's not a main character and I suspect she'll be gone in the next few episodes anyway, so I don't feel TOO bad that she's getting cheated on a little here. but yeah...oops

swirls and flowers are ALWAYS my default for doodles.

delicatetobreak July 13 2011, 11:58:49 UTC

Aww, I really liked this. Hannah and Emily have such nice chemistry on the show and this was written so perfectly. I would love to read more PLL fic from you!

zoicite July 14 2011, 00:30:02 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D I'm currently watching the show for the first time and suspect that as I catch up, I'll be itching to write more.

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zoicite July 14 2011, 00:30:24 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D