Fic :: Merlin :: The Stumble and the Fall :: Part 1: The Stumble

[zoicite]

Comments

[bramble_rose]

OOh, a mystery!! This is completely enthralling and you've really done a great job of showing Arthur working through everything that's happening (love Arthur pov stories, btw) and how even when he realizes Merlin IS a warlock, he's ready to protect Merlin. Eagerly awaiting the next part to see what mahem occurs next!!!

[zoicite]

Thank you so much! This is my first time writing these characters and I'm really enjoying writing Arthur's POV, so I'm so happy to hear that you've enjoyed reading it! Next part should be up in the next day or so. Thanks so much for the feedback. :D

[stella_owned]

Wow, I think you did an amazing job with their characterization in this. I could so see it playing out in my head. Lovely story. Looking forward to the next part! :D

[zoicite]

Thanks so much. This is my first time writing in the fandom, so that's lovely to hear. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I'm hoping to have the 2nd half posted in the next day or two. :)

[claudine]

This was so exciting to read! Definitely has me on the edge of my seat waiting for more. Arthur and Merlin's awkwardness was adorable and although I love me an angsting Arthur, he wasn't overdone here at all which keeps up the comedic element of S1, I think. XD

tl;dr: I loved it!

[zoicite]

Thank you so much, both for reading and for the lovely feedback! The goal is to get the 2nd half up and posted in the next day or two.

[archaeologist_d]

I love how Arthur was defending Merlin when he was indeed a sorcerer. Loved that he didn't wait but got Merlin to run while he could.

[zoicite]

Thanks for reading and thank you for the feedback! I'm really enjoying writing these two and I'm glad you're enjoying as well. Next part should be up in the next day or so!

[zoicite]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed! The goal is to get the 2nd half posted in the next day or two. Thanks for reading. :D