Fic :: Sherlock :: The Reluctant Relationship (1/2)

Feb 27, 2012 00:50

Title: The Reluctant Relationship ( Read more... )

john/sherlock, sherlock

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drinkingcocoa February 27 2012, 14:45:04 UTC
OH MY GOD THIS IS EXQUISITE.

You have found the living vibrating pulse of the entire show and kept your story on it the entire time.

And I especially love the deduction about the barmaid.

And the hint of Lestrade. Always good.

I cannot even tell you how thrilled I was to find the words "Part 2" at the bottom of this. I thought it was ending.

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ladymac111 February 27 2012, 17:46:11 UTC

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zoicite February 29 2012, 04:10:22 UTC
#1. love the gif!

#2. THANK YOU!

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zoicite February 29 2012, 04:08:08 UTC
You have found the living vibrating pulse of the entire show
aaah, I love you for thinking this. Seriously, your flattery feedback is killing me here and I feel like I'm failing at appropriate feedback to your amazing feedback, but again, THANK YOU!

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gypsyandthecat February 27 2012, 17:13:31 UTC
This is brilliant. I loved the lines:

“So they’re afraid to ask you if you’re gay because you’re tall and you frown a lot,” John concluded. It made me smirk.

And

“A year ago I said I wasn’t looking for a relationship,” Sherlock said. “That was true. I ended up with one anyway. And you said that you weren’t gay.”

“I’m not,” John agreed. He frowned.

“And yet, you’re still here.”

You really captured the essence of their characters. I'm too happy that there is a part two.

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zoicite February 29 2012, 04:09:23 UTC
Thank you so much! (again! as I think I just responded to you in part 2 as well)

It's possibly that I giggled at that first line while writing it as well. ;)

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livia_bj February 27 2012, 20:54:36 UTC
Wonderful. Just need to say that.
I'm gonna read part 2 right now.

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zoicite February 29 2012, 04:09:36 UTC
thank you!!

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opaljade February 27 2012, 21:18:40 UTC
Very well written and in character. I also enjoyed the subtle humour and John's insights. So well done! :D

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zoicite February 29 2012, 04:09:51 UTC
thank you so much!

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