Fic :: Jesus Christ Superstar :: So Tonight That I Might See (1/3)

Jun 16, 2012 22:38

Title: So Tonight That I Might See ( Read more... )

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eirenical August 7 2012, 16:14:15 UTC
OK. Here I am. Proving you wrong. Not three years, but three HOURS. *preens* Forgive me, though, it's a little stream-of-consciousness-y. -.-;;;

I still love that first moment with them in the alley. So much. I love how you can almost feel Judas' yearning to keep Jesus at his side there... and maybe do a bit of snuggling. :)

“I don’t know you,” Judas countered. He did look at her now, had to. “How can I dislike you?”

“You don’t want to know me,” Mary agreed, her chin turned up toward him, her mouth a line.

I love these lines of dialogue. When she isn't being willfully blind, Mary always sees right through to the heart of things and isn't afraid to say so. Love that. ^_^

Judas watched as she pushed her skirts aside, crouched down beside the flames.

THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE CHILINA!MARY POSES, OMG. Chilina~~~~~~~~~~~ *_* I also loved your description of her obvious position of authority -- it ties into the other idea so well.

Judas felt a hand on his back and, startled, he turned to find Jesus standing beside ( ... )

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