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eirenical August 7 2012, 21:21:51 UTC
OK, so I feel I should make a substantive review for this chapter, but mostly I want to flail over the RIDICULOUSLY HOT SEX, OMG. Because it is. Ridiculously hot. *_* *kowtows and worships appropriately*

*coughs* Moving on, now.

When Jesus’ lips moved they formed Judas's name, though Judas couldn’t hear the word.

I was totally picturing Paul!Jesus' nightmare here, just so you know.

((Also... but Jesus shook her head... heh. Freudian slip? Gender!swap thoughts in the works? *tease* *teaes* ^_~))

Mostly, though, that whole scene... *wobble eyes* ...especially this line: “A nightmare,” she translated. “Another.” I LOVE the implied intimacy and knowledge there. I love that of all people he's confiding in Mary and that Mary has been at his side and watching him long enough to know the truth that even he won't tell her. *_* Love.

Jesus said, leaning over Judas, a palm warm against Judas's backSTILL OBSESSED WITH ALL THE POSSESSIVE CASUAL TOUCHING ( ... )

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