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Fic - Hair - The First Move - 3/3

Dec 06, 2009 21:39

( The First Move (3/3) )

claude/berger, hair

Comments 19

layaround December 7 2009, 20:17:57 UTC

See, it did turn out awesome and perfect! Best best best ever.

layaround December 7 2009, 20:22:40 UTC

But seriously for all the trouble you thought this was going to be, it's like BEYOND what I thought it would be, even better. Swoon.

zoicite December 9 2009, 10:43:35 UTC

Yay! thank you!!! And thanks for listening to me whine about it for FOREVER! ;) OMG finally done!

claude December 7 2009, 21:14:11 UTC

i'm having trouble finding words for how amazing this is. seriously, this is beyond anything i could have imagined. brilliant, beautiful prose, and such a well-told story. SCREAMS, DIES, ETC.

zoicite December 9 2009, 10:45:35 UTC

I know I already told you this, but thank you for the feedback! :D
I got so frustrated with this story, I think just cause it ended up way longer than I'd planned and I had trouble looking at it as a whole and figuring out if it was working, you know? (I guess that would be one of the reasons people use betas!)
Anyway, I'm really glad you liked it!

moritzpascal December 8 2009, 06:08:27 UTC

I'm incoherent. That was just perfection. I'm going to go back and read this a thousand times. Love love love love.

zoicite December 9 2009, 10:56:59 UTC

Oh, yay! Thank you! I couldn't get my head wrapped around this story by the end to tell if it was really working as a whole anymore (man, I did NOT plan for it to be that long!), so I'm so so glad to hear that you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for the feedback :D

bachelor_girl December 9 2009, 00:09:10 UTC

Dude.

DUDE.

Can I be you when I grow up? Because, whoa.

Yes.

The End.

zoicite December 9 2009, 10:55:10 UTC

Oh yay! LJ did not send me an email notification, so this comment was a surprise when I came here. aw, you read it in its insane longness!

(P.S. You can only be me when you grow up if you move back down here and hang out with me a lot. Being me requires tutelage that cannot be conducted across international lines. ;) )

Thanks for the feedback!

And Corbin Bleu, In the Heights?? RANDOM

bachelor_girl December 9 2009, 15:42:01 UTC

of course I read it in it its insane longness!

it was worth every word, too.

and, seriously. WTFstuntcasting??? But, seriously, how much fun would it be if he pulled a Kevin Richardson and was actually *good*.

I'm personally hoping for that.