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Fic - White Collar - Best Intentions

Feb 16, 2010 00:31

Fandom: White Collar
Pairing(s): Peter/Neal/Elizabeth
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~3,500
Summary: If Peter had learned anything in the last couple months it was that sometimes it was good to shake up the routine. A short, light, valentine-ish story.

( Best Intentions )

caffrey/burke squared, burke/caffrey, white collar

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zoicite February 18 2010, 12:24:50 UTC

thank you!

Lovely ursula4x February 16 2010, 14:27:50 UTC

I likeEl realizing that, if she waited for Peter to start talking, she would wait forever. I like the misunderstanding that Peter's plan caused in the best way. I love El forcing them to bring their feelings out into the open.

Re: Lovely zoicite February 18 2010, 12:25:28 UTC

aw, thank you so much! This story was a lot of fun to write.

hoosierbitch February 16 2010, 15:33:42 UTC

Oh, man, this story is SO GOOD! I smiled the whole time I was reading, and got a big rush of warm-fuzzies with the ending. Yay!

zoicite February 18 2010, 12:29:38 UTC

aw, yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the feedback :D

ext_186374 February 16 2010, 18:06:29 UTC

Beautifully written. I'm still smiling from it.

zoicite February 18 2010, 12:30:05 UTC

thank you! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!

dine February 16 2010, 18:44:07 UTC

I loved this! you did a fabulous job of conveying all the levels of confusion and intent, and set things up for a really different Valentine's Day!

zoicite February 18 2010, 12:30:55 UTC

aw, thanks so much! I really enjoying dipping my toes into this fandom a lot. I'm glad you liked the story! :D