Fic - Sherlock - Aftermath

[zoicite]

Fandom: Sherlock
Pairing(s): John Watson, Sherlock Holmes
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~2,000
Spoilers: picks up after 1x03
Summary: John awoke face down in a swimming pool. His ears were ringing and he blinked down into the murky water, stunned and disoriented for just a moment before he gasped and sucked water into his lungs.

Comments

[eirenical]

New fic! Oh crap. In a fandom I don't know. O_O Yet. Shoot. Where were those links you sent me again...? *fumbles around in her e-mails*

10:10 PM... Screw it. Read it, anyway. ^_^

So adorable! (O_O Oh great, now I'm doing it. O_O) I especially love how after getting shot at, blown up and drowned, Sherlock would fixate on the fact that John was "kissing" him. *snickers* I also love how in spite of being worried about Sherlock being in shock, John was actually the one who was all shock-y and flail-y and stressed. ^_^

I also love how you actually knew that the mouth-to-mouth part of resuscitation is now obsolete. ^_^ You rock. And you have made me want to see this show. Now I really have to find my links. ^_^

[zoicite]

Aw, lookit you being all awesome and reading fic for a show you haven't even seen!

Thanks!

And you SHOULD watch it! You should!

(P.S. the kissing line was a play on an exchange between the two characters that happens in the show basically a scene before my fic starts:
John: "Well, I'm glad no one saw that"
Sherlock: "Hm?"
John: "You ripping my clothes off in a darkened swimming pool. People might talk."
Sherlock, kinda shrugging: "People do little else" (i think that's his response. I can never understand him here)
I'd extrapolate more on the context, but I want you to watch, so i'll just leave it at that. ;))

[eirenical]

Well... I figured since you wrote it, I should at least give it a shot. ^_^ And it was well worth it! :D

And, OMG, that scene is awesome. ^_^ You know what would be even more awesome? If you could resend the link to the episodes. O_O I can't find them. *whimper*

[zoicite]

hee! well, thank you for the flailing!! :D :D

[minim_calibre]

\o/

[zoicite]

I see your \o/ and raise you an :D

Thanks!

[dominique012]

This is so well written!! So them. I could see the whole thing happening so clearly, including the excellent kissing lines.

Loved it. :)

[zoicite]

Thank you so much! It's always a little nerve wracking to start writing in a new fandom, so I'm glad you found it to be very them. Thank you for the feedback! :D

[cosmic]

*draws hearts all over this*

I love John in this.

[zoicite]

Aw, thank yooou! I love this incarnation of john in general. So glad you enjoyed! :D