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[zaber324]

ok so i wrote this yesterday in math cause the night before my parents and a certain teacher made me feel like a complete failure well here it is

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[spagetti_o]

thats pretty good, about halfway you started rhyming, i dunno if thats what you meant to do or not. i liked "his dreams are dead like last years flowers" and the last verse a lot.

i don't know what happened but i hope you feel better, and keep writing

~Lyssa

[zaber324]

to the ryming thing i wasnt really awake when i wrote this so when i went back and read it i was like wow this is totally out of character for mei really dont think i cared about the ryming cause i have some poems with it and some with out i was in a really bad mood when i wrote it too...i think

[michygeary]

Darling, I am so sorry :( Adults are the piss suck. They give us this "I know how hard it is, I went to school too," shit, but they don't realize that they went to school in a COMPLETELY different time than us. They DON'T know what we're going through, no matter what they say. They think it's easy -- they've got NO clue. If they can't accept us for who we are -- if they can't be proud of what we HAVE made of ourselves -- then fuck them. They're not worth our time.

Anyone who tells you that you're a failure is beyond the suck. Your friends know what a true force of nature you are -- don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

*hugs* Hang in there. We all love you, babe.

~*Michy*~

[zaber324]

yea that whole u have not ieda whatits like thing is what i want to say but i kno that if i do i will simply be making it worse i have really done alot of writing latly too its kinda weird