Comments | zackary: Chapter 1

zackary

Chapter 1

Mar 04, 2005 07:42

Well here it is.. or a rough draft of it anyways ( Read more... )

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vulpinepilot March 4 2005, 15:43:14 UTC

very powerful
funny thing, right when I read the part about his eyes, my friend was telling me she wanted to see a pic of my eyes, cuz they tell everything.

zackary March 4 2005, 23:40:03 UTC

Thanks. And I know the eyes truely are windows to the soul.. I'm glad my own are fixed. I used to have the very eyes I described... just not red.

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zackary March 4 2005, 23:41:35 UTC

Well I keep geting Ideas to have her be in. don't worry to much thoue. she won't be involved in anything unclean.

I don't care to have her parents wrath directed at me.