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[zainne]

He salvages the guitar from the wreckage of the house at the dying request of its inhabitant, an old man with fading blue eyes and a network of laugh lines around his mouth. He doesn’t know why they always turn to him; victims seem to have an unerring instinct of pinning him as their only hope.

He can’t help much. Still, death by two quick

Comments

[anonymous]

Hmm... I liked the last one better. In here, you're laying the bitterness down really thickly, and it's not as enjoyabe or effective as when you do it subtly (think French movies!). I sympathized with Reg last time, but this time I was all, "Omg shut it, shoegazer." The details were amazing last time, but this time they seemed more forced.

But there were some awesome moments, like the Dumbledore venom bit, the house unity ear muffs and this...

“I can never understand you wizards, and the way you think you’re so different from ordinary folk.” She says shaking her head, eyes warm. “You get everything so easily that you think life is as easy as snapping your fingers. . .
Yey.

[mayacito]

Oh, this is Maya

[energyxbuper]

"a connoisseur" YES!!!

And the Harrison ref. was pretty good....a bit awkward to my ears though. But I actually love the point you are making with Sirius and how his upbringing is very difficult to obliterate.