Comments | zakamus: The Dance of Shiva

zakamus

The Dance of Shiva

Mar 16, 2005 16:54

This was a free story writting assignment I did for english that I finished a few days ago. I enjoy posting my writting here so well here you go, its called "the Dance of Shiva"
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bloodofariver March 17 2005, 02:15:35 UTC

Eek don't have time to read it now but I will soon

Btw I LOVE SHIVA!!!!!!!! Eeeeeeeeeeeeee

bloodofariver March 17 2005, 03:31:57 UTC

Zach, that was a really pretty story.
I thought his transition was too fast or not fast cause it took years but during those years nothing was changing untill everything did.
Sudden, it was to sudden.
It was still very good

zakamus March 17 2005, 03:34:26 UTC

lol yea, thats what you get when I want to write a novel in 3 pages.

awesomeface90 March 17 2005, 05:08:37 UTC

that was amazing zach. really, really amazing. :-)

zakamus March 17 2005, 12:31:34 UTC

why, thank you.

ur story is maxnuss March 17 2005, 22:40:17 UTC

awesomeness

poppytoads March 17 2005, 23:23:10 UTC

You have to let me (and Mia, since we read it at the same time) know what grade you get. In my eyes, that deserves an A.

zakamus March 17 2005, 23:27:04 UTC

and thats what I got! yaynes. exept see everybody in the class gets a grade and then a grade with the grammer errors. we get to correct those and regain our points tho. I got a B- with grammer erros and an A withought them.

son_of_earth March 19 2005, 23:10:08 UTC

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